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A Few Old Poems :3
Just some stuff that I had in my old poetry journal-ish thing :3 I know they're not all great or anything, but I'm a little fond of a couple of them~ Some of them might seem a little "omg, I'm emo", but not all are
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02-26-2007, 07:52 PM | #2 | |
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The last one was really good IMO. It had a rhyming scheme and the point was put across well. The others were made with good inspiration but no real rhyming scheme. Overall good poems especially the last. Keep 'em coming.
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02-26-2007, 07:58 PM | #3 |
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Re: A Few Old Poems :3
Thanks for the comments~ I really try to avoid rhyme scheme in my poetry for the most part, unless it just works out without being forced :3
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02-26-2007, 10:01 PM | #4 |
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