12-18-2005, 03:09 PM | #41 |
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RE: Re: RE: Re: RE: Flasion
I'm not in it.
It fails.
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12-18-2005, 03:51 PM | #42 |
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It's awesome. =)
I wanna be in it =(
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12-18-2005, 04:50 PM | #43 |
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Maybe i'll write a prequel or sequel.
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12-18-2005, 05:31 PM | #44 |
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I like that i die and come back, thats pretty cool. i like the chapter alot. The whole story is great. A sequel and/or prequel would be cool.
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12-18-2005, 07:42 PM | #45 |
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Thus ends this epic tale of betrayal. I may be writing a prequel or sequel and I made a topic in the Garbage Bin where you get to vote if I should either write a prequel, sequel, or none. If you post please vote. don't just post and not vote.
Also, take the thread in the garbage bin seriously because if I had put it in Chit Chat I would have been banned for it. -Thanks, LK The End |
12-18-2005, 10:40 PM | #46 |
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It's cool, but....
I dunno, it's one of those things that's hard to place your finger on. Maybe it's your writing style, it seemed a bit odd to me. I think that if you wait for a year, then rewrite it, it would be awesome. Nice story though. Hey wait, I'm not in it. =P
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12-19-2005, 12:36 AM | #47 |
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Cool ending, I don't care to much for fantasy, but this was interesting.
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