One Winged Angel (my own version)

[Master_of_the_Faster]

I made this new, insane version of One Winged Angel and while it's not complete and the chorus is not perfect, I would say this techno version of it is pretty awesome. Tell me what you think of it (by the way, it should say w/ chorus or something like that): http://www.reverbnation.com/motf

[Erothyme]

I'm not trying to be a downer, but I am simply textualizing my reactions:

I'd like to point out, because it bothers me, that it's not "techno" at all. Also, you contributed very little to the composition and managed, actually, to neutralize most of its assets. Furthermore, be careful with clipping.

[Master_of_the_Faster]

Well, how are the assets neutralized as you suggest? I can still make the song better of course (hopefully). Also, is there any way for me to make that chorus in the background sound better?