09-8-2007, 11:01 AM
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Re: ღ♥ღ♥my farewellღ♥ღ♥
lmfao if this isn't a troll it's kind of pathetic that someone made a poem based on icons
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09-8-2007, 11:32 AM
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Re: ღ♥ღ♥my farewellღ♥ღ♥
Found the icons humorous.
PS: How about someone actually attempt to write a non-emo poem one of these days.
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09-8-2007, 12:32 PM
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Re: ღ♥ღ♥my farewellღ♥ღ♥
i'll take you up on that fantasticone the first unit of my writer's craft course is poetry so i'm going to have to put some **** together and i'll probably post it here
ps poems are typically emotional but jrockette here doesn't seem to understand that posting nine hundred billion poems saying I LOVE YOU WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME ;_; is extremely cliche and dull
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09-8-2007, 03:00 PM
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Re: ღ♥ღ♥my farewellღ♥ღ♥
Make your lines shorter. What you're saying in two or three lines can easily be put into one stanza and it's easier to read.
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