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Old 09-8-2007, 12:33 AM   #1
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As these tears drop from my hazel eyes, my heart is acheing and it's all because of your lies.

I thought i could trust you but i was wrong becuase you were lying to me all along.

People told me that there are plenty "fish in the sea" but you were the only one that meant so much to me.

Now you're nothing but an old memory.I can't linger on...Can't take this pain.So now it's time for me to move on.

I cryed myself to sleep for so many nights and i'm not the same as before but it's not your fault...

I should have known that love also comes with pain...I should have known that this was all just a game.

This thing called love has hurt me so deeply and at times i think that i can never love again but i'll have to stay strong and let this all go.

I can't let this happen again...I never knew what real love was like but i guess i should wait for the right person to come to me.

I see that you're taken and already had someone in mind.So while you're with her...i wish you both the best in life.

This is my farewell and goodbye.
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Old 09-8-2007, 12:36 AM   #2
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wtf?
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Old 09-8-2007, 12:39 AM   #3
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Old 09-8-2007, 12:40 AM   #4
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wtf?
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Old 09-8-2007, 12:44 AM   #5
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Edit: This picture decided to show up, and it ruined this post completely... so...

This thread is suck.

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Old 09-8-2007, 12:47 AM   #6
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Darkbear, maybe they're just stupid. Or retarded. Or both. Restupitard.
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Old 09-8-2007, 01:13 AM   #7
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Welcome to FFR!
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Old 09-8-2007, 01:14 AM   #8
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:O, welcome
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Old 09-8-2007, 01:53 AM   #9
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maybe you need to get offline and go get some air. i dont see how you could even hook up with someone if your posting this
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Old 09-8-2007, 01:57 AM   #10
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age 13/myspace profile.
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Old 09-8-2007, 01:57 AM   #11
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obvious troll is obvious
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Old 09-8-2007, 02:04 AM   #12
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Age 13 is allowed sillies! She is just an average teenage girl and figured she would share some of her poetry, be nice to her.

Very nice poem, lots of emotion.

Though you could have limited it to one picture, prefferably one without text in it, choosing one special picture that fits the mood would be better in my opinion.

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Old 09-8-2007, 02:07 AM   #13
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wow, that was dumb, not even interesting, it was freaky o.O

*cough* emo *cough*
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Old 09-8-2007, 02:08 AM   #14
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Are we supposed to read the pictures too?
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Old 09-8-2007, 07:56 AM   #15
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.....wtf lmao
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Old 09-8-2007, 08:14 AM   #16
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Guys, it's in the literature section for a reason, she wants to know how her poem was. I'd say it was alright, you showed how you felt the whole way through, but less pics. As Chunky said, maybe limit it to one that shows emotion for the entire thing.
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Old 09-8-2007, 08:24 AM   #17
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p.....i.....a.....n....
wait wtf does that spell....
ohhhhh pain ok
well she sorta already told us what her poem is gonna be like
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Old 09-8-2007, 10:46 AM   #18
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Is this a suicide note? haha
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Old 09-8-2007, 10:48 AM   #19
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Old 09-8-2007, 10:50 AM   #20
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Excellent poetry, it's superb. Instead of most bits an pieces of rhymes i read, this one actually had me thinking that you were heartbroken. That's mood for you. You should write more.
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