01-20-2006, 09:53 PM | #1 |
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So I came across a Poem I wrote years ago...
I was browsing through some old binders and found this poem I wrote back in high school.
It's a little sappy, and not very well done, but it's what you get for 10 minutes of writing. Tell me what you guys think. btw, i can't think of a title for it. Maybe you guys could help me out there. I can't say I've ever felt this way, A little scared, a little sad, and happy all the same. This pressing feeling that makes me stay, Is just the feeling I cannot name. It’s the little things I think of alone, It’s knowing I’ll be alright. It's the sudden changes in my life, And the people who make them bright. It’s wanting to be there, to keep someone safe, When their burdens are hard to bear, It's sharing your hopes, and your dreams, It’s showing someone you care. It’s something that you truly want, But rarely seem to find. It’s a little piece of happiness, And it’s of the purest kind. It’s something that drives you try again, To give something a chance, It’s knowing that no matter what, You’ll always have a friend. I think I’ve figured out what I’ve found, From the verses wrote above, It’s the only force that can’t be bound, This feeling I’ve found, it’s love. Well there you have it, cheesiness and all. What'd ya think? |
01-20-2006, 11:01 PM | #2 |
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RE: So I came across a Poem I wrote years ago...
Finish indigo already you fucking bastard.
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01-21-2006, 12:32 PM | #3 |
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My 11 year old brother told me that i should find a melody and just play with the words in the poem.
It really should be a song. "It's something..."
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בקצה השמיים, ובסוף המדבר, יש מקום רחוק מלא פרחי בר מקום קטן, עלוב ומשוגע, מקום רחוק מקום לדאגה יש אומרים שם שמשיקרה וחושבים אל כל מה שקרה אלוהים שם יושב ורואה ושומר אל כל משברא אסור לקטוף את פרחי הגן אסור לקטוף את פרחי הגן ודואג ודואג נורא |
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