someone step my (trance) song please

itachi147 · 04-26-2011, 04:02 PM

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/408320

It has fair reviews and a 4.43/5 score, could someone please step it for me?

AsphyxZero · 04-26-2011, 04:25 PM

jesus ****ing christ what the hell is that eq

**SocoNhydro420** · 04-26-2011, 05:15 PM

by the way, i LOVE your avatar

ill consider stepping it for you, the song sounds great! well done

00Razor00 · 04-26-2011, 05:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by itachi147

It has fair reviews and a 4.43/5 score, could someone please step it for me?

Current Score
4.32 / 5.00 (- 0.11)

**Plan_Bsk81127** · 04-26-2011, 05:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 00Razor00

Current Score
4.32 / 5.00 (- 0.11)

Current Score
4.29 / 5.00 (- 0.025)

AsphyxZero · 04-26-2011, 06:12 PM

4.25 / 5.00 (- 0.048)

Shikari · 04-26-2011, 06:15 PM

Current Score
4.22 / 5.00 (- 0.024)

who_cares973 · 04-26-2011, 06:18 PM

lets all jump on the dick in ass bandwagon yeah

AsphyxZero · 04-26-2011, 06:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by who_cares973

dick in trance

oic

Shikari · 04-26-2011, 06:26 PM

To be quite honest, I wasn't bandwagoning. EQ, as mentioned before, was quite bad, synth usage was too generic and I wouldn't play it if it was on FFR, but that's just me

00Razor00 · 04-26-2011, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by who_cares973

lets all jump on the dick in ass bandwagon yeah

Uh, I zero bombed it to begin with because, in my opinion, it wasn't all that great. As others mentioned previously, bad EQ, it clips, generic synths/beat, etc.

justin_ator · 04-26-2011, 06:35 PM

Not too bad. I dunno how exactly it would be as a simfile, but it's nice to listen to. And lawl EQ, work on that a little.

**TC_Halogen** · 04-26-2011, 07:29 PM

Go back and try to fix some of the equalizing in the song. The structure of the song doesn't seem bad, but the synth is way too strong, which is giving the song a muddy sound. It's a shame because the melody sounds pretty nice.

Try adding some compression to your synth -- the abrasive sound of the synth itself is a problem, but putting it at full volume makes it even more of a problem.

Everyone has to start somewhere -- don't let people get to you.

**SocoNhydro420** · 04-26-2011, 07:35 PM

I agree with TC about the critisism. FFR isnt the best place for public constructive critisism, just public critisism thats borderline trolling haha. Dont be discouraged. Keep at it!

itachi147 · 04-26-2011, 09:25 PM

thanks guys, i actually noticed the EQ problem before anyone responded and i fixed it for the most part on my computer, i haven't updated it yet though and yeah the trolling here is nothing compared to on that site. to be honest i wasn't expecting many responses to begin with.

Xx{Midnight}xX · 04-27-2011, 01:28 AM

Um, no.

04-26-2011, 04:02 PM	#1
itachi147 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 8	someone step my (trance) song please http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/408320 It has fair reviews and a 4.43/5 score, could someone please step it for me?

04-26-2011, 04:25 PM	#2
AsphyxZero Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Las Vegas Age: 33 Posts: 1,823	Re: someone step my (trance) song please jesus ****ing christ what the hell is that eq

04-26-2011, 05:15 PM	#3
SocoNhydro420 FFR Veteran Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Baltimore MD (USA) Age: 34 Posts: 915	Re: someone step my (trance) song please by the way, i LOVE your avatar ill consider stepping it for you, the song sounds great! well done __________________ MUST... AAA... FMO AAAs (27): Epidermis, Exciting Hyper Highspeed Star, Rottel-da-station, Disconnected Hardkore, Melonmans OP, Battle Theme #37, Fast Asleep, Gacha Gacha Hertz Figu atto Radio, Puzzle, Midnight Dragon, Distorted God, Variations 2, Strangeprogram, Arrogant Cobbler, Kanon Medly ~Metal Wings~, Dance and Zeal, Heavenly Spores, Document 13b, The Divine Suicide of K, Yorukumoryuu Yamikaze, Summer Time Perfume, Chaosmaid, Colorful Course, O (piano version), Ambient Angels, Defection, Jeanie and Caroline

04-26-2011, 06:12 PM	#6
AsphyxZero Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Las Vegas Age: 33 Posts: 1,823	Re: someone step my (trance) song please 4.25 / 5.00 (- 0.048)

04-26-2011, 06:18 PM	#8
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 35 Posts: 15,407	Re: someone step my (trance) song please lets all jump on the dick in ass bandwagon yeah __________________

04-26-2011, 06:35 PM	#12
justin_ator 🥓<strong><span style="col Resident Overseer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Kingsport, TN Posts: 7,648	Re: someone step my (trance) song please Not too bad. I dunno how exactly it would be as a simfile, but it's nice to listen to. And lawl EQ, work on that a little. __________________

04-26-2011, 07:29 PM	#13
TC_Halogen Rhythm game specialist. Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Bel Air, Maryland Age: 32 Posts: 19,376	Re: someone step my (trance) song please Go back and try to fix some of the equalizing in the song. The structure of the song doesn't seem bad, but the synth is way too strong, which is giving the song a muddy sound. It's a shame because the melody sounds pretty nice. Try adding some compression to your synth -- the abrasive sound of the synth itself is a problem, but putting it at full volume makes it even more of a problem. Everyone has to start somewhere -- don't let people get to you.

04-26-2011, 07:35 PM	#14
SocoNhydro420 FFR Veteran Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Baltimore MD (USA) Age: 34 Posts: 915	Re: someone step my (trance) song please I agree with TC about the critisism. FFR isnt the best place for public constructive critisism, just public critisism thats borderline trolling haha. Dont be discouraged. Keep at it! __________________ MUST... AAA... FMO AAAs (27): Epidermis, Exciting Hyper Highspeed Star, Rottel-da-station, Disconnected Hardkore, Melonmans OP, Battle Theme #37, Fast Asleep, Gacha Gacha Hertz Figu atto Radio, Puzzle, Midnight Dragon, Distorted God, Variations 2, Strangeprogram, Arrogant Cobbler, Kanon Medly ~Metal Wings~, Dance and Zeal, Heavenly Spores, Document 13b, The Divine Suicide of K, Yorukumoryuu Yamikaze, Summer Time Perfume, Chaosmaid, Colorful Course, O (piano version), Ambient Angels, Defection, Jeanie and Caroline

04-26-2011, 09:25 PM	#15
itachi147 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 8	Re: someone step my (trance) song please thanks guys, i actually noticed the EQ problem before anyone responded and i fixed it for the most part on my computer, i haven't updated it yet though and yeah the trolling here is nothing compared to on that site. to be honest i wasn't expecting many responses to begin with.

04-27-2011, 01:28 AM	#16
Xx{Midnight}xX FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 8,548	Re: someone step my (trance) song please Um, no.

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