A Yoshi Story, By: Lil'Yoshi (ME)

[Lil'Yoshi]

DAYS OF A DORKY DINO!
Dedicated to Yoshi lovers.
Allow me to introduce myself, I'm Mario, your narrator. I have a friend named Yoshi. This special dinosaur told me to tell you the story. So here it goes, Doshi was a new dinosaur at school. He was blue. He wore glasses and had braces. The other dino's used to call him Dorky Doshi. He walked in the classroom. Ready to learn, when these dinosaurs in leather jackets and sunglasses came over and began to push him around. "Hey dork.", the red one said. "We're the rulers aroung this area, so you better watch out."
"This is his seat!", the orange one said. Doshi quickly got up and moved. He sat next to a grey dinosaur.
"Hi, I'm Coshi.", He introduced himself. Doshi asked about the mean dinos in the leather jackets."Oh, those guys? They are a group called the Zioshis. Don't mind them, they always do that."
Days passed, Doshi was bullied day after day he was thrown in the ttrash can and given wedgies. You name it. Coshi had never, not even once, stood up for Doshi.
"I think those Zioshis are kind of cool. The sleek leather jackets and those mysterious sunglasses. Oh what I'd give to be one of those awesome Ziosis.", Coshi commented.
Would you give up our friendship?", Doshi asked, looking serious.
"No, friendship is important."
Doshi closed his eyes, trying to belive Coshi. "How about I call you tonight?", Coshi asked.
"sounds great.", Doshi said.
Later that night, Doshi had not gotten a single call. He waited by the phone. "Why won't he call me?", he asked himself. "Doooshiii!", his mom called. "Time for diinnerr!"
"Kay mom!", Doshi headed downstairs.
The very next day, Doshi was on his way to school when he saw the Zioshis. They weren't coming torwards him, but something was bad: COSHI WAS WITH THE ZIOSHIS, WEARING THE JACKET AND SUNGLASSES! One of the other Zioshis wasn't wearing his jacket and sunglasses, they all left him.
Doshi ran over to the green dinosaur.
"Hi.", Doshi said
"Hi, I'm Yoshi.", the green dino replied.
"What happend back there?" Doshi asked Yoshi.
"Oh, I got kicked out of the Zioshis because I wasn't making fun of anyone and Coshi took my place because he's rude."
"How is he rude?", Doshi questioned.
"Coshi talkes behing your back.", Yoshi answered. Doshi got angry
"he said he was my FRIEND!"
"Some friend, Coshi said that you were a nerd.", Yoshi said. " Doshi, would you like to be my new friend?", Doshi smiled. "Sure!", he answered.
Later that night, Yoshi arrived at Doshi's door, with some shoes. They were orange Koopa boots.
"Ding Dong!!!", the doorbell rang. Doshi answered.
"Hi!", Doshi smiled.
"Hello.", Yoshi said, entering the house, "these are for you.", he handed Doshi the shoes.
"Thank You.", he said.
"You're welcome.", Yoshi replied. "Oh, I almost forgot.", Yoshi brought one of his hands out from behing his back. "These are kooler sunglasses than the Zioshis, here you go Doshi."
Doshi thanked Yoshi then it was time to go.
Months passed, Doshi got his braces taken off...
He also got contacts...
Yoshi taught Doshi to be cool by being himself and by being nice. And it worked. At school, Yoshi and Doshi were kooler than the Zioshis. Doshi even changed his name to Boshi.
And for Coshi........ he wishes he would've stuck with Boshi.
I hope this story has taught you a thing or two. If you excuse me, I have to go unclog a pipe filled with flying turtles and walking mushrooms in it. Bye

[Lil'Mario]

Cool

[Hunter Whitner]

Yeah, cool... I guess.

Who cares? B_U_M_P! ^_^

[OMG its HIM]

yeah, its a good story, but the ending isnt that good, i was excpecting bosshi to kick some a**...

[funmonkey54]

Pretty nifty!

[Lil'Yoshi]

I really suck at writting. Plus, the ending had to suck, it was a childrens book. And BTW, no violence. But I'd make stuff explode if i couldve...

[Lil'Yoshi]

Epilogue: After all of that, Boshi needed revenge. He took some dynamites and put in in Coshi's locker. He died right before first period. No one came to his funeral. So sad*JK*.
Boshi and Yoshi also poisned the Zioshi's shyguy sandwiches. No one even threw them a funeral. There parents just barried them in the backyard and had a party. Woo!

[CAFK]

....eh?!

[OMG its HIM]

Originally Posted by Lil'Yoshi

Epilogue: After all of that, Boshi needed revenge. He took some dynamites and put in in Coshi's locker. He died right before first period. No one came to his funeral. So sad*JK*.
Boshi and Coshi also poisned the Zioshi's shyguy sandwiches. No one even threw them a funeral. There parents just barried them in the backyard and had a party. Woo!

thats a very very...sad ending.

[TheRapingDragon]

Quick thing - If it's a children's book then you may want to look into being able to spell correctly. I noticed a few errors throughout.

[championanwar]

Originally Posted by TheRapingDragon

Quick thing - If it's a children's book then you may want to look into being able to spell correctly. I noticed a few errors throughout.

True, but regardless of that, its pretty good

[Lil'Yoshi]

thanx but I posted this in a hurry! But there's no errors in the one I made on paper and had edited by three people plus 2 teachers.^_^. plus there was no epilogue!