12-13-2009, 02:29 PM | #121 |
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Re: Rebound Vibrajacking Pack Finale! (Submissions)
Although true that if you step on 0.3x rate you will be able to hear and layer more accurate, however you must keep in mind that all these files are being played on 1.0x rate or higher. If you're too accurate with layering, you're going to end up semi-overlayering and making awkward-to-hit patterns and bursts.
There's no point in layering something you can't hear on 1.0x rate when you can only hear it once you've lowered the rate, which no one will do unless they're reviewing your file. This is why your previous submission was rejected. You focused way too much on pitch relevancy and accuracy that you completely ignored the overall file as a whole. It was way too boring and generic to even play through despite being "accurate" as you put it. Files must be enjoyable or fun in a way in order to be replayable. You can't get even more generic than a file comprised of all 8th note/16th note stream that goes to a repetitive song.
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12-13-2009, 02:40 PM | #122 |
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Re: Rebound Vibrajacking Pack Finale! (Submissions)
thanks alot to give me advices how to make my files better
I only make my Clouds over California file more accurate and the solo is a bit overstepped, but the jacks are fine I think After that I step my Black Metal file further, which is not as generic and repetitive as my A Parenthesis in Eternity file I stepped like 2k steps yet, so it doesn't take that long until i finish it |
12-13-2009, 03:43 PM | #123 |
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Re: Rebound Vibrajacking Pack Finale! (Submissions)
How to create FUN AND REPLAYABLE steps fffffff...
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12-13-2009, 06:15 PM | #124 | |
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Blue pretty much covered this. Look at his notes. Rejected (Dossar) Grind4 As "accurate" you tried to make it there was way too much one hand bias and awkward-to-hit patterns. I found absolutely no replay value in this file other than the scoring factor. Also, terrible song choice. Rejected (Rogdor) Boomstick Nice gimmicks however file was way too ****ing boring and generic. I tried not to quit out, rofl. Rejected (Dossar + Samurai7694) Kiranger Quit out. What the **** was this. Rejected (Moches) Programmed Sun Rejected from Xoon 5 but I'll accept here. Accepted (Haru-ko) Artificial Children File was pretty boring and generic despite having some colour theory. Hmmmm 192nd usage. Looks like someone is copying my stepping style, rofl. Rejected (Alexdestructions vs Bynary Fission) 888 V2 Same as my Xoon 5 review. Quote:
Didn't really need a restep IMO. Scylaax's file was good. Hands and mines were overused. The polyrhythms weren't really necessary either and ruin the file. Rejected (Rogdor) Bloomin' Dying lmfao you stepped this MAD. Your hold usage was poor, inconsistent and all over the place. Layering is decent but needs work in areas. The beginning took way too long before arrows came up. You could've at least stepped the vocals or something in the beginning or cut the beginning of the song off. Rejected (Dossar) U3 Tune Song choice was pretty generic which makes for a generic file. Found absolutely no fun or replay factor in this file. Pretty much look at Blue's notes for things to fix up but even so I doubt this is pack worthy material even with fixes. This song did not warrant any hands or quad usage because the song itself wasn't very dominant to begin with. Those quads were useless and don't add/emphasize anything in the song. Rejected (_.Spitfire._) Bag lmfao what the **** was with that gigantic BPM. I have to admit though, that gimmick was very unique and I've never actually seen this done before. Makes a creative but good joke file. Accepted
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Re: Rebound Vibrajacking Pack Finale! (Submissions)
Okay, time for a HUGE update. Check back into this thread within the next hour or two.
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Only because you asked nicely Will review other files later tonight or tomorrow
(Masuat) Digital Emotions Overall, file is well structured and enjoyable. In-depth review that answers your questions is located below this review but to summarize, Accepted. Sending in a fix in regards to the details listed below are optional. Quote:
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12-16-2009, 11:03 PM | #127 |
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When looking at Bloomin' Dying, could you look at v1 so as to avoid confusion? I sent in a v2 because I thought everyone had reviewed it. |
12-16-2009, 11:23 PM | #128 |
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I think Ill send my Knife and Babylon Skorcher file here. I dont know where else they can go.
There is no theme to the two songs, just 2 normally stepped breakcore songs that were rejected from Xoon5. Unless theres another pack out there that accepts normal stepped files. Last edited by operationstrawbarry; 12-16-2009 at 11:30 PM.. |
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Re: Rebound Vibrajacking Pack Finale! (Submissions)
Hey, I sent something as well, where's my file?
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12-18-2009, 12:46 AM | #130 |
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Re: Rebound Vibrajacking Pack Finale! (Submissions)
Am on a trip for 2 weeks on Friday; I think I'll have very limited computer access for the duration. I'll check back for updates. Happy holidays
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