Monthly Artist Packs *Bullet For My Vallentine* - Page 4

**L0NEvvolf** · 10-18-2009, 06:55 PM

I wanted it to be overlayered seeing as its the hardest of the 3 difficultys Im stepping for the song. Can't make it easy.

The0thMoon · 10-18-2009, 06:56 PM

I would cool down on the holds then, I understand it's there go layer the guitar part, but make them shorter then. Because it's waaaayy too cluttered and nobody wants to read a **** load like that.

The0thMoon · 10-18-2009, 07:01 PM

Oh yeah at the slow part, I'd halve the bpm to signify that it slowed down, forgot about that part.

End of the chorus you're missing a 16th in that fill. Forgot about that too.

**NocturneAunamic** · 10-18-2009, 07:05 PM

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Originally Posted by The0thMoon

Waking the Demon- (LONEvvolf)

4) The solo's wrong. It should be 24ths I believe, and I would put them as 3's going 432 432 etc since it's a tapped solo.

It's 32nds. The Tabs for the actual song on guitar is 17-14 (8 times) and 16-13 (8 times) tapings on the high e string.

The0thMoon · 10-18-2009, 07:07 PM

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Originally Posted by NocturneAunamic

It's 32nds. The Tabs for the actual song on guitar is 17-14 (8 times) and 16-13 (8 times) tapings on the high e string.

at his bpm I'm pretty sure it's 24th's. I don't wanna find out, it's his job to do so. But anyway, I'm saying it shouldn't be a trill, it shouldn't 432 432 etc.

ps; I know how to play the solo thank you

**NocturneAunamic** · 10-18-2009, 07:12 PM

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Originally Posted by The0thMoon

at his bpm I'm pretty sure it's 24th's. I don't wanna find out, it's his job to do so. But anyway, I'm saying it shouldn't be a trill, it shouldn't 432 432 etc.

Gotcha. I wouldn't know, i can't play his file. ****in rar files.

The0thMoon · 10-18-2009, 07:20 PM

Anyway, finally starting on Scream Aim Fire.

Dr Tran · 10-18-2009, 08:16 PM

keep in mind i use ddream so instead of posting measures i'll be posting time signatures

waking the demon

offset is wrong it should be -0.167

4.87 you have the 4th hold longer than a 8th when the note isnt held that long

18.25 you forgot the 4th to the guitar

62.69 theres a 16th there above the 12th(same goes for when this part repeats)

85.43-85.89 you stop stepping the drums and just add a 4th jump in the middle

the mini freeze usage for the ting sound is inconsistent. sometimes you put a mini freeze to it and sometimes you dont.

using freezes for the guitar is really really annoying so i suggest you only use the freezes when the note is sustained.

the solo was off sync. dont be afraid to use color notes and check your stuff at .3-.5 rate

your hand and jump usage was pretty lame. i dont suggest layering everything all the time. jump files get really boring and repetative since you have very little patterns at your disposal. accept with fixes rejected if left as is

The0thMoon · 10-18-2009, 08:37 PM

lol I was waiting for Carlos' review.

**revolutionomega** · 10-18-2009, 09:16 PM

Agreed with Carlos.
Overstepping for the sake of the difficulty level doesn't make the file better.
Look at the guitar charts on rock band if you get a chance. Something like this overall would probably be better.

**L0NEvvolf** · 10-18-2009, 09:39 PM

how will it be fun if theres not alot of notes though?

Dr Tran · 10-18-2009, 09:52 PM

the amount of notes in a file does not determine the amount of fun >_O

example: moches balloon park from xoon 4

song choice also plays a huge role when making a fun file. in your case there isnt a lot to work with so your chart is probably the best the song can offer with some changes of course

**insanefreddy926** · 10-19-2009, 11:01 AM

twenty five bucks eh. I may just step something...

**L0NEvvolf** · 10-19-2009, 01:49 PM

Or 50 bucks if you get both

The0thMoon · 10-19-2009, 02:09 PM

Pretty close to finishing Scream Aim Fire, it's not that great lol.

**L0NEvvolf** · 10-19-2009, 02:11 PM

Send it to me I wanna play it

Oh and the website is up but it needs a bunch of work so for now I will just keep it to the FFR fourms. I spent $150 on the domain and host site so it should hopfully come out nicely when finished.

http://www.stepmaniamonthly.com/

The0thMoon · 10-19-2009, 02:11 PM

When I finish it, I'll submit it.

The0thMoon · 10-19-2009, 02:27 PM

Sorry, page not found.

**L0NEvvolf** · 10-19-2009, 02:43 PM

Oh well it needs tons of work anyways. But it can hold 30terabites of info. Thats enough for a few thousand stepmania packs right.

The0thMoon · 10-19-2009, 02:48 PM

10-18-2009, 06:55 PM	#61
L0NEvvolf FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 2,068	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine I wanted it to be overlayered seeing as its the hardest of the 3 difficultys Im stepping for the song. Can't make it easy.

10-18-2009, 06:56 PM	#62
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine I would cool down on the holds then, I understand it's there go layer the guitar part, but make them shorter then. Because it's waaaayy too cluttered and nobody wants to read a **** load like that.

10-18-2009, 07:01 PM	#63
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Oh yeah at the slow part, I'd halve the bpm to signify that it slowed down, forgot about that part. End of the chorus you're missing a 16th in that fill. Forgot about that too.

10-18-2009, 07:20 PM	#67
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Anyway, finally starting on Scream Aim Fire.

10-18-2009, 08:16 PM	#68
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine keep in mind i use ddream so instead of posting measures i'll be posting time signatures waking the demon offset is wrong it should be -0.167 4.87 you have the 4th hold longer than a 8th when the note isnt held that long 18.25 you forgot the 4th to the guitar 62.69 theres a 16th there above the 12th(same goes for when this part repeats) 85.43-85.89 you stop stepping the drums and just add a 4th jump in the middle the mini freeze usage for the ting sound is inconsistent. sometimes you put a mini freeze to it and sometimes you dont. using freezes for the guitar is really really annoying so i suggest you only use the freezes when the note is sustained. the solo was off sync. dont be afraid to use color notes and check your stuff at .3-.5 rate your hand and jump usage was pretty lame. i dont suggest layering everything all the time. jump files get really boring and repetative since you have very little patterns at your disposal. accept with fixes rejected if left as is Last edited by Dr Tran; 10-18-2009 at 09:15 PM..

10-18-2009, 08:37 PM	#69
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine lol I was waiting for Carlos' review.

10-18-2009, 09:16 PM	#70
revolutionomega FFR Veteran Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: White Plains, New York Age: 32 Posts: 2,240	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Agreed with Carlos. Overstepping for the sake of the difficulty level doesn't make the file better. Look at the guitar charts on rock band if you get a chance. Something like this overall would probably be better. __________________ "AW MAN, WE SUCK AGAIN!" - Rob Schneider, The Waterboy (1998)

10-18-2009, 09:39 PM	#71
L0NEvvolf FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 2,068	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine how will it be fun if theres not alot of notes though?

10-18-2009, 09:52 PM	#72
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine the amount of notes in a file does not determine the amount of fun >_O example: moches balloon park from xoon 4 song choice also plays a huge role when making a fun file. in your case there isnt a lot to work with so your chart is probably the best the song can offer with some changes of course

10-19-2009, 11:01 AM	#73
insanefreddy926 Super Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: the Andromeda galaxy Age: 32 Posts: 187	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine twenty five bucks eh. I may just step something... __________________ yeaorwgh.

10-19-2009, 01:49 PM	#74
L0NEvvolf FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 2,068	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Or 50 bucks if you get both Last edited by L0NEvvolf; 10-19-2009 at 02:13 PM..

10-19-2009, 02:09 PM	#75
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Pretty close to finishing Scream Aim Fire, it's not that great lol.

10-19-2009, 02:11 PM	#76
L0NEvvolf FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 2,068	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Send it to me I wanna play it Oh and the website is up but it needs a bunch of work so for now I will just keep it to the FFR fourms. I spent $150 on the domain and host site so it should hopfully come out nicely when finished. http://www.stepmaniamonthly.com/ Last edited by L0NEvvolf; 10-19-2009 at 02:13 PM..

10-19-2009, 02:27 PM	#78
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Sorry, page not found.

10-19-2009, 02:43 PM	#79
L0NEvvolf FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 2,068	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine Oh well it needs tons of work anyways. But it can hold 30terabites of info. Thats enough for a few thousand stepmania packs right.

10-19-2009, 02:48 PM	#80
The0thMoon FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 119	Re: Monthly Artist Packs Bullet For My Vallentine :O

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