Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! - Page 7

**Silvuh** · 08-4-2006, 01:05 AM

Of course, no one comments on my work...
Anyway, Sylverline, your art is really interesting to look at... I really like the first and the last ones of your four previous sig images you posted. The first one is, well, I'm not good at saying what I want to, but I like the flow of the stream and the little.... glittering.. thing... And the seahorse is really cool... And the fading hexagons make sure that it's not too bland, along with the star field... or whatever it is.... I'm n ot exactly sure what to say about the next two... sorry. But the fourth one.. I like how it looks, well it looks to me like it was done in pencil, and not in photoshop, and I like that...
As for CJ's angel, it's.. visually and meaningfully interesting... or something like that... It looks like it's either fading away, or, uh, appearing.... but the contrast with it and the black surroundings.... And I find it amazing how the head actually looks like a head..... .... I should probably just be quiet now...

FluorescentArmy · 08-4-2006, 03:25 AM

Silvuh:

I like the first one.
Second and third ones are a turn off to me. Lack of color/brightness
The rest look great

I do see a recurring straight line coming out from the sides. Seems to be a motif in your work. I like the tribal one alot. I gotta get a Deviant Account thing

Sol_Solis · 08-7-2006, 02:14 PM

Here's one I did yesterday.
Crit appreciated.

FluorescentArmy · 08-7-2006, 05:13 PM

Woot sol is back to pwn us.

Looks freaking sweet. But I don't know what agua is..

Sol_Solis · 08-7-2006, 05:23 PM

Water in spanish, it makes it very cool and chic, come'on everyone knows that :[
Oh btw, worst person on deviantart:
http://tinyurl.com/lwy25

FluorescentArmy · 08-8-2006, 06:06 AM

Damn straight.

I gotta figure out how to make animations. I can't find any guides.

Sol_Solis · 08-11-2006, 10:18 PM

**Pyroshock** · 08-11-2006, 10:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sol_Solis

Water in spanish, it makes it very cool and chic, come'on everyone knows that :[
Oh btw, worst person on deviantart:
http://tinyurl.com/lwy25

I clicked that and it went to my dA page...

I'm not that bad.

Anyways, some abstract stuff. Remember to click the small image to get the full view.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33343877/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37182614/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34591588/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34627295/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32915130/

And Sol, your stuff pwns.

Sol_Solis · 08-11-2006, 11:18 PM

Rofl
me.deviantart.com = you logged in ;D\
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37858852/

FluorescentArmy · 08-14-2006, 11:59 AM

Sol just pwnd this entire thread in one posting of art.

Sol_Solis · 08-14-2006, 10:43 PM

Just a fun piece, not that great, just a boredom killer.

Super_Panda_Riot · 08-14-2006, 10:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sol_Solis

Water in spanish, it makes it very cool and chic, come'on everyone knows that :[
Oh btw, worst person on deviantart:
http://tinyurl.com/lwy25

That's awesome. I felt like an ass when it went to-...and I thought... I won't spoil it.

**aperson** · 08-15-2006, 12:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sol_Solis

Agua

The vertical lines are too strong. The piece already has a strong up and down motion, making them that opaque is just overkill and makes the piece distracting.

Lose the diagonal lines over the middle of the image. They're completely out of place and are a completely disharmonious gestalt.

Work on the typography for agua, you have a smooth and cohesive image then some random halfway grunged-out text that's way too big.

Sol_Solis · 08-15-2006, 02:08 AM

I thought the ray-lines gave it good direction/movement and an abstract representation of sunrays underwater.
I really appreciate your advice and maybe you could help me in the future in my process, and I'd like to note text is really my weak point :\
I actually looked for your gesalt thread the other day to help improve a piece I was working on, but found that the images in the thread weren't working(which was unfortunate).

**aperson** · 08-15-2006, 03:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sol_Solis

I thought the ray-lines gave it good direction/movement and an abstract representation of sunrays underwater.

Well you already have a lot of vertical motion in the piece just from the gradiation and orientation of the main 3d piece. I think the ray-lines could work, but as it is now they're a bit too strong.

With typography, realize that the look of the text expresses a lot about the feeling the words convey. You have a sleek smoth piece with a smooth gradation between all the elements of it. Your text should have a similar feel to it: A techno-futuristic sans serif font with rounded edges and somewhat narrow lines immediately comes to mind as a good match for it.

Sol_Solis · 08-15-2006, 08:38 PM

Well I made a new version and took your advice, I decided to keep the rays but reduce their size and opacity, I removed the scanlines across the center and changed the text to match what you had told me.

Thanks.

Cj_leonine · 08-15-2006, 09:00 PM

...bitch.

Sol_Solis · 08-15-2006, 09:06 PM

What?

Sol_Solis · 08-16-2006, 06:35 PM

FluorescentArmy · 08-17-2006, 03:19 PM

Space scenes are always cool. Brb. Gotta check rambo forums and post siggy I made for someone.

EDIT: Ok gots it.

08-4-2006, 01:05 AM	#121
Silvuh quit Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: anywhere but here Posts: 938	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Of course, no one comments on my work... Anyway, Sylverline, your art is really interesting to look at... I really like the first and the last ones of your four previous sig images you posted. The first one is, well, I'm not good at saying what I want to, but I like the flow of the stream and the little.... glittering.. thing... And the seahorse is really cool... And the fading hexagons make sure that it's not too bland, along with the star field... or whatever it is.... I'm n ot exactly sure what to say about the next two... sorry. But the fourth one.. I like how it looks, well it looks to me like it was done in pencil, and not in photoshop, and I like that... As for CJ's angel, it's.. visually and meaningfully interesting... or something like that... It looks like it's either fading away, or, uh, appearing.... but the contrast with it and the black surroundings.... And I find it amazing how the head actually looks like a head..... .... I should probably just be quiet now... __________________

08-4-2006, 03:25 AM	#122
FluorescentArmy Forum User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Gattrobe, Pistolvania Age: 32 Posts: 1,754	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Silvuh: I like the first one. Second and third ones are a turn off to me. Lack of color/brightness The rest look great I do see a recurring straight line coming out from the sides. Seems to be a motif in your work. I like the tribal one alot. I gotta get a Deviant Account thing __________________

08-7-2006, 02:14 PM	#123
Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Here's one I did yesterday. Crit appreciated.

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FluorescentArmy Forum User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Gattrobe, Pistolvania Age: 32 Posts: 1,754	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Woot sol is back to pwn us. Looks freaking sweet. But I don't know what agua is.. __________________

08-7-2006, 05:23 PM	#125
Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Water in spanish, it makes it very cool and chic, come'on everyone knows that :[ Oh btw, worst person on deviantart: http://tinyurl.com/lwy25 Last edited by Sol_Solis; 08-7-2006 at 06:19 PM..

08-8-2006, 06:06 AM	#126
FluorescentArmy Forum User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Gattrobe, Pistolvania Age: 32 Posts: 1,754	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Damn straight. I gotta figure out how to make animations. I can't find any guides. __________________

08-11-2006, 10:18 PM	#127
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Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Rofl me.deviantart.com = you logged in ;D\ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37858852/ Last edited by Sol_Solis; 08-12-2006 at 01:24 AM..

08-14-2006, 11:59 AM	#130
FluorescentArmy Forum User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Gattrobe, Pistolvania Age: 32 Posts: 1,754	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Sol just pwnd this entire thread in one posting of art. __________________

08-14-2006, 10:43 PM	#131
Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Just a fun piece, not that great, just a boredom killer. Last edited by Sol_Solis; 08-15-2006 at 05:51 PM..

08-15-2006, 02:08 AM	#134
Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! I thought the ray-lines gave it good direction/movement and an abstract representation of sunrays underwater. I really appreciate your advice and maybe you could help me in the future in my process, and I'd like to note text is really my weak point :\ I actually looked for your gesalt thread the other day to help improve a piece I was working on, but found that the images in the thread weren't working(which was unfortunate). Last edited by Sol_Solis; 08-15-2006 at 02:14 AM..

08-15-2006, 08:38 PM	#136
Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Well I made a new version and took your advice, I decided to keep the rays but reduce their size and opacity, I removed the scanlines across the center and changed the text to match what you had told me. Thanks.

08-15-2006, 09:00 PM	#137
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08-15-2006, 09:06 PM	#138
Sol_Solis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 660	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! What?

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FluorescentArmy Forum User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Gattrobe, Pistolvania Age: 32 Posts: 1,754	Re: Post your Photoshop(Only) work here! Space scenes are always cool. Brb. Gotta check rambo forums and post siggy I made for someone. EDIT: Ok gots it. __________________

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