04-4-2007, 12:47 PM | #121 |
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Re: The Tin Cowboy
Tough crap I already edited the main text in the actual Word Book file to include a conclusion to Gary.
And I like his conclusion. It brings up the other side of the drug use. Not everyone that uses it is a villian that needs to be put down.
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04-4-2007, 05:30 PM | #122 |
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Re: The Tin Cowboy
Hey, I didn't say I didn't like it.
You just said, "People are going to die," and I guess I was expecting more people to die. Don't be like that. ): |
04-5-2007, 11:49 AM | #123 |
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Here goes:
Editing over the next few weeks. Anything you think is weak story/character wise or any complaints you have in general should be posted and I'll do my best to address them. Thanks!
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04-17-2007, 12:35 PM | #124 | |
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Started editing today. Got through about one page in 25 minutes.
So far - 0.5% complete. Or 99.5% to completion. Quote:
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