artist for I Burn should be "Jeff Williams feat. Casey Lee Williams"
Blame Wafles if its incorrect, I just go based off what the website states. If we want to be really accurate I guess it should be "Jeff Williams Feat. Casey Lee Williams & Lamar Hall"
The letterforms are so similar that I see only "DDD" or "JJJ" with even "OOO" if I squint and/or blur my vision. And I won't bother ranting on about consistency in letterforms when you warped everything intentionally but to keep it short and sweet, it doesn't look aesthetically pleasing (frankly it just looks like bad graffiti done by a middle school kid, no offense) and the legibility and readability is really fucked up. I do understand if your objective was to make something mildly chaotic to match the song, but there are other alternatives and better ways to do this.
Also consider changing the typeface for "terminal 11" because I can't even begin to make sense of why the numerals are the exact same letterforms as the lowercase "i". It's just overall a poorly designed typeface, rofl.
Just my opinions, take it with a pinch of salt. If it's completely okay with Wafles and co. then there's no need to give a shit about what the font police has to say.
The letterforms are so similar that I see only "DDD" or "JJJ" with even "OOO" if I squint and/or blur my vision. And I won't bother ranting on about consistency in letterforms when you warped everything intentionally but to keep it short and sweet, it doesn't look aesthetically pleasing (frankly it just looks like bad graffiti done by a middle school kid, no offense) and the legibility and readability is really fucked up. I do understand if your objective was to make something mildly chaotic to match the song, but there are other alternatives and better ways to do this.
Also consider changing the typeface for "terminal 11" because I can't even begin to make sense of why the numerals are the exact same letterforms as the lowercase "i". It's just overall a poorly designed typeface, rofl.
Just my opinions, take it with a pinch of salt. If it's completely okay with Wafles and co. then there's no need to give a shit about what the font police has to say.
Yeah, I didn't really consider legibility when I chose the typeface. I'll redo it if other people have trouble making out the text.
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