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  • FissionMailed1
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2012
    • 1267

    #841
    Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

    Alex plz, that isn't what I meant.


    YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS.

    MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN.

    YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND.

    YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE.

    THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS.

    I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

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    • AlexDest
      good hot
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Sep 2007
      • 5309

      #842
      Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

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      • Arntonach
        Owlbears Rock!
        • Mar 2012
        • 2494

        #843
        Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

        I thought you were supposed to step every sound you here I guess my is a lie.
        pack of hard stuffs

        pack of my stuffs

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        • swordmasterz
          FFR Player
          • May 2006
          • 272

          #844
          Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

          Originally posted by AlexDest
          time to step everything heard on 0.3x
          time to move to BMS

          mo' layers mo' fun

          seriously i don't get 4key sometimes
          o

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          • FissionMailed1
            FFR Player
            • Feb 2012
            • 1267

            #845
            Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

            4-key is simply more mechanical by nature. You are restricted to only 4 columns, so it is inevitable that files will require finesse in addition to rhythm to be able to play them.


            YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS.

            MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN.

            YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND.

            YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE.

            THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS.

            I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

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            • dascookieman
              FFR Player
              • Jan 2006
              • 3248

              #846
              Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

              by ur side
              it was not bad but it has the same repeating rhythms over and over and they aren't that much fun to begin with. it would be a cool up-tempo file if it had a bit better variation, right now it's basically 3 long parts that are all exactly the same. the beginning part was ok for a while, but not that much fun since almost every arrow was a jump (at least it felt like that) and it went on for quite a while. then in the next part it's the same except for that there are 32nd rolls every other measure or so and this was fun at first, but also got old and repetetive. and the same thing with the last part with the minijacks, really cool at first but it goes on for a while and it gets old and annoying to play, i also don't think this part was accurately made, seemed like there were a few minijacks missed and some misplaced.


              don't say anything
              cool file but i'm not too sure about those mines, i think many would require memorization of the melody/rhythm to hit them, i hit it correctly automatically because i know the song from playing zanthro's file a few times back in the day. if i didn't know how it goes i think it would have annoyed me greatly and made me not wanna play it again. you can do as you like with the mines, the file is superfun for scoring anyway, the jacks are perfect in a low-bpm file like this and make it really fun while it doesn't feel cluttered at all. will likely accept after revision


              measure 3 one 16th too much before the [14]-jump
              measure 4 the minijacks shouldn't be both on the up-arrow since it's different sounds
              measure 12 there should be a few jumpjacks in the end (baseline+percussion (which is what you're following))
              measure 13&17 one more 16th should be a jump at the end
              measure 18 a few trips missed imo
              measure 20 trip missed on first 4th or one trip too much in the middle of the measure
              measure 23 i would have done the last jacks as 4 16ths on one arrow (bassdrum). then make the 16ths jumps because the melody hits and the 4th and 8th singles
              measure 26 missing vocal jumps
              measure 26-39 this part is a bit messy and has some errors here and there i think, should be looked over carefully

              i'll forget you but you'll never forget me (revision)
              it's really cool and fun there are just a few parts that i still don't like, will accept after revision


              meausre 9-15&25-27&29-31 don't think there should be minijacks here, it isn't accurate and there are already a lot of jacks in the file. the jumpjacks inbetween the sections are awesome though because it's obv 2 sounds now
              measure 16&32&58 there are missing notes here, before the minijacks there is a 16th missing (see the edit i made)
              measure 33&37 missing note after the first trip-4th, it's 4-arrow jacks like the rest of this section
              measure 57 too much jumps


              edit: sorry i'm retarded, i played beginner. all this was obviously fixed in light, the only thing that wasn't was the missing 16th in measure 33&37. this will be accepted


              satori de pon
              didn't like this at all. not very much fun to just hit a million 8ths and the patterns aren't that much fun either, when something other than just 8ths does happen it's not in fun patterns or rhythms. also so repetetive.



              gravestoned is still an empty .sm and was last edited 2013-03-31 so you sent me the wrong file again :P

              also including scintill's st alphonzo's pancake dinner and my own crack in the hourglass (checked by kommi)
              Last edited by dascookieman; 04-15-2013, 11:02 AM.

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              • SKG_Scintill
                Spun a twirly fruitcake,
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Feb 2009
                • 3877

                #847
                Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                Originally posted by dascookieman
                also including scintill's st alphonzo's pancake dinner
                breakfast





                Originally posted by bluguerilla
                So Sexy Robotnik (SKG_Scintill) {.0001/10} [--]
                ___
                . RHYTHMS PR LAYERING
                . ZOMG I HAD TO QUIT OUT TERRIBLE
                .

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                • Dj_Ossa
                  SMGroove
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • May 2006
                  • 478

                  #848
                  Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                  I'm like half done with my submission... Got stuck in one part because NieN LOVES to distort shit when it gets crowded.

                  EDIT: I lied more like 30% -_-
                  Last edited by Dj_Ossa; 04-15-2013, 08:38 AM.
                  My FFR Stats ^_^;;

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                  • Choofers
                    FFR Player
                    FFR Music Producer
                    • Dec 2008
                    • 6205

                    #849
                    Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                    haven't heard anything about stepping la villa strangiato so yeah I'm gonna go ahead and start working on it

                    hopefully I'll have it done for this!

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                    • baq12
                      FFR Veteran
                      • Jul 2008
                      • 186

                      #850
                      Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                      Originally posted by Choofers
                      haven't heard anything about stepping la villa strangiato so yeah I'm gonna go ahead and start working on it

                      hopefully I'll have it done for this!
                      Ooooh you think we can collab on it? I would love to chart that!

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                      • Choofers
                        FFR Player
                        FFR Music Producer
                        • Dec 2008
                        • 6205

                        #851
                        Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                        definitely !!

                        I'm working on the first two minutes or so, once I'm done with that I'll see if I can send to you

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                        • baq12
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Jul 2008
                          • 186

                          #852
                          Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                          Originally posted by Choofers
                          definitely !!

                          I'm working on the first two minutes or so, once I'm done with that I'll see if I can send to you
                          Awesome! Can't Wait!

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                          • Arntonach
                            Owlbears Rock!
                            • Mar 2012
                            • 2494

                            #853
                            Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                            I sent in my Missy Elliot simfile. Hope you like it. If it's accepted, I'll need to change the difficulty and remove the bg animations to videos that don't exist.
                            pack of hard stuffs

                            pack of my stuffs

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                            • NeoMasterPie
                              Forum User
                              • Jul 2007
                              • 1405

                              #854
                              Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                              i'm almost positive my SM is a measure behind yours or something, but i got it figured out


                              measure 3 one 16th too much before the [14]-jump nah it goes to the bass synth
                              measure 4 the minijacks shouldn't be both on the up-arrow since it's different sounds i did a rather lazy and random layering switch here. fixed it for you
                              measure 12 there should be a few jumpjacks in the end (baseline+percussion (which is what you're following)) i didn't want a triple minijack here tho
                              measure 13&17 one more 16th should be a jump at the end i disagree
                              measure 18 a few trips missed imo i made the guitar strums hands for you
                              measure 20 trip missed on first 4th or one trip too much in the middle of the measure yeah one hand too many here
                              measure 23 i would have done the last jacks as 4 16ths on one arrow (bassdrum). then make the 16ths jumps because the melody hits and the 4th and 8th singles alternating jumps and singles on one hand is gay as fuck to hit, but i appreciate the suggestion
                              measure 26 missing vocal jumps
                              measure 26-39 this part is a bit messy and has some errors here and there i think, should be looked over carefully any technical errors here are more than likely for flow but chances are there are some glaring ones too so i'll look at it anyways mang !!


                              thX for the feedback dascookieman (o:

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                              • dascookieman
                                FFR Player
                                • Jan 2006
                                • 3248

                                #855
                                Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

                                sweet, looking forward to your revision it was a cool file for sure.

                                for measure 13&17, the 16th that isn't a jump has all the same sounds hitting on it as all other jumps and hands around it so for me it makes no sense that it isn't a jump as well, it wouldn't ruin flow or anything it would be easier to follow as well imo
                                redarging measure 23 you wouldn't have to have jumps and singles on one hand, you can just put [32][3][31][3] and then you have that last 16th left arrow to the melody after. when they're [34][34][12][12] like that i don't think it's representing the current sound well, and a 4-arrow jack at this bpm is fun

                                these are of course minor details, if you still don't want to change it it's fine but i feel it would be a minor improvement
                                Last edited by dascookieman; 04-15-2013, 09:11 PM.

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