ODIPack3 submissions (Release when graphics are done)

[04im]

Originally Posted by SKG_Scintill

If you take all the accepted stepfiles, the top 3 most appearing letters are:
L: 154 times
N: 118 times
E: 89 times

Le

[Arntonach]

So we need to work on r, s & t then?

[Nick Skyline]

Since "Unconnected." is only available right now to those that competed in Division 7 of the Tournament and cannot be unlocked by anyone, I figured TC_Halogen would be picky about permissions regarding other takes on the song, and whether or not he'd let me step it. I figured he would make me find an alternative, likely for reasons I couldn't figure out. I posted in the "FFR Genocide" thread asking him if I could step it, and he said back:

Originally Posted by TC_Halogen

In my eyes, you never should have to ask a simfile artist to chart a song they have already if you like the song. I'll never consider it disrespectful and personally encourage seeing a different take on a song that I've already done. Go right ahead

In short, GREEN LIGHT!

EDIT: Done and sent.

[dascookieman]

captain murasa's ass anchor
awesome!!! haha fun as heell!! a few errors were noticable when playing and there are a bunch more that could improve the file a bit i think, will accept this after revision.

measure 8-9 i don't think you should switch between the sounds like this, i think it can be made really cool if just layered properly
measure 11&15&66&70 it's a 16th minijack on the first 4th? you don't have to have it as a jack if you don't want to though
measure 11&66 the last 16th isn't there
measure 17 you could have a freeze in the middle of the mines or even have some kind of trill to that scream instead of the mines but it's cool the way it is
measure 26&28&30 one 8th too much in the middle
measure 26-30 i would do this entire section differently with the 4ths only being jumps if both the melody and bassdrum hits and not just the bassdrum, when it's just singles to the bassdrum i would try to make this obvious with patterns instead, i doing it that way makes following the melody when playing it easier since now all 4ths look the same regardless of if the melody hits on it or not. but this is a stepping style thing and you can do as you like
measure 31 i think this would also be cooler if you kept the melody and just added singles to the percussion, it'll still become climactic and most of the percussion will become jumps
measure 33 i would remove the mines and add that cool sound
measure 40 the first 16th isnt there
measure 41 you could add 2-3 freezes to the end of this sound
measure 41 you could have a trill to the same scream again if you want to
measure 43 1 more vocal note between the 48th and the jump
measure 42-53 the vocals could perhaps be a bit more on-beat here and there in some parts here but overall it's fine
measure 55 1 missing 16th right after the first 4th
measure 55 why are there 3 jumps it's nothing else there
measure 56-61 if the jumps are to the very subtle snare drum then there are some missing ones. i would just layer the vocals here instead since you'll get a similar looking result and they're obviously much much more prominent. the strings can still give you some 16ths.

danger danger
it's pretty cool, some parts are awesome but it could be a lot better i think and it's inconsistently difficult with that first 32nd burst being sooo much harder than everything else, the rest of the file will be a fairly easy sdp for many but that part spikes in difficulty brutally, it should be toned down. also the ending that has the stuttering vocals should have some kind of ending-climax with minijacks to those vocals for sure! also see to it that everything else is done accurately, and i can see this being accepted


mariostep
the first parts with the 16th jacks is wrong (not the first long one before the 32nds), it was 12ths and a few 24ths in there, it can be made really cool actually. the part with the long double-jacks i don't understand why they aren't singlejacks and then the other layer that played a note every once in a while added instead. it felt pretty dumpy. but it was cool when a few trips came in to that other sound. the long stream had 3 missing notes in the melody in the song but in the file it's a constant stream. the pipe-sound color notes could be 3-4 instead of 2 it sounded like, would be a bit better i think. the end is pretty cool but could also perhaps be more climactic. the song has potential but the file has a lot of stuff that needs to be changed, but it could turn out really cool in the end


(i wanna give you) devotion (revision)
was already accepted but i just had to mention it here because it's so amazing now damn

[TC_Halogen]

Originally Posted by Nick Skyline

Since "Unconnected." is only available right now to those that competed in Division 7 of the Tournament and cannot be unlocked by anyone, I figured TC_Halogen would be picky about permissions regarding other takes on the song, and whether or not he'd let me step it. I figured he would make me find an alternative, likely for reasons I couldn't figure out. I posted in the "FFR Genocide" thread asking him if I could step it, and he said back:

In short, GREEN LIGHT!

I'm about 20 seconds in.

I look forward to see your take on the song!

[baq12]

Im almost done on my chart of Salieri strikes back! Expect the edited sm with mi40s edit soon!

[04im]

awsome dude very excited to see your chart

[Gundam-Dude]

Originally Posted by dascookieman

captain murasa's ass anchor
awesome!!! haha fun as heell!! a few errors were noticable when playing and there are a bunch more that could improve the file a bit i think, will accept this after revision.

Originally Posted by dascookieman

But I won't accept any modifications to released files, so if you want your file in this pack it would not be a good idea to release it before it has been judged here.

There's a disconnect here—do you want me to fix it or not, lmao.

I haven't actually taken a look at what you wanted me to change yet thoroughly, so I'll get back to you on this later for any justification on what I did. But chances are whatever changes I make would be very minimal—I like the file how it is already, other than me changing patterns around to match what I'd prefer now compared to when this file was first released zzz

[Nick Skyline]

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

There's a disconnect here—do you want me to fix it or not, lmao.

I haven't actually taken a look at what you wanted me to change yet thoroughly, so I'll get back to you on this later for any justification on what I did. But chances are whatever changes I make would be very minimal—I like the file how it is already, other than me changing patterns around to match what I'd prefer now compared to when this file was first released zzz

If you've already released a file in another pack, it probably won't get accepted here. IIRC, Captain Murasa's Ass Anchor is already downloadable as part of another pack (the SM Wiki page on you tells me that it's in Subjectivemania Collab Pack). You can fix it if you want, but I'll leave the decision on whether or not this file gets in with GLoVE.

[dascookieman]

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

There's a disconnect here—do you want me to fix it or not, lmao.

yeah i know but i'm willing to make a couple of exceptions to this since i want at least one file from as many authors as possible in the pack. if you make a new difficulty and we get new graphics it would be okay. otherwise we'd have two different versions of it floating around that could possibly be mixed up which is what i'm trying to avoid

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

I haven't actually taken a look at what you wanted me to change yet thoroughly, so I'll get back to you on this later for any justification on what I did. But chances are whatever changes I make would be very minimal—I like the file how it is already, other than me changing patterns around to match what I'd prefer now compared to when this file was first released zzz

the file as a whole is fine, the "pure errors" are not many and mostly about a single 16th too much or being left out, it obviously doesn't affect the end result much. the rest are mostly suggestions on how to make the file even better, i would recommend making another chart and experimenting a bit with this as i think the file could turn out superawesome

[buizel8888]

If I don't complete my file before the deadline I will bang a chick. This is my solemn promise.

[dascookieman]

screw chicks and step arrows!!

[Coolboyrulez0]

what if im 2 lazy to screw chicks and fix my file ???

[blindreper1179]

Do what's more important. SM needs your fixes!

[dascookieman]

got a bunch of submissions again, will try to get reviews done at latest monday.

it would be great if many of you worked on revisions since there are quite a few files now that would make it in the pack after revision, if anyone wants to contact me and discuss their file you can add me on skype, "dascookieman"

[xVaLoRx]

Glove, I just sent you a new file and I think I accidentally put a ' at the end of the link and I don't have enough time so send another email. Just letting you know

[04im]

aiyaaa

trying to finish up salieri with baq & gentleman but i hit a block ZzzzzzZ

[Coolboyrulez0]

Geeeeee-
wooooooooooooo!
Geenntleeeeemannnnnnnnnn.
woooooo-wooooo-wooooooo-woooooooo.

I'm hyped, unless you mean PSY then I'm gonna be sad.

[04im]

vsnares

[xVaLoRx]