11-14-2005, 05:37 PM
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The story seems pretty interesting. Though a few parts didn't seem to flow so well in my mind as I read it, overall, it looks well done.
Also, if you're going to place multiple chapters in one thread, I'd ask that you also make links to the thread pages where the chapters are. The thread gets cluttered as later chapters are written and replies are made.
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