Untitled StepMania Pack submissions

[Fission]

i need to know who stepped insane techniques before i review it. the submission email doesn't make it clear.

i also need to confer with nathan about turn back the time since i may be slightly biased about some things

Zomby Woof (Scintill) - ACCEPTED
- Did you ever wake up in the morning with a zomby woof behind your eye?
no and if i did i'd probably punch it out of reflex. that probably wouldn't end well for me either way.
- 27.55s: missing 32nd (possibly intentional if you are stepping just vocals?)
- 101.84s: i don't think this should be a jump. also in this section, i would suggest trying to pr the jumps to that bell instrument.
- 149.28s: missing 32nd
- 197.14s: can't figure out what this 32nd is going to
- 287.01s: misrhythm
- 334.93s to 335.22s: should be 32nds

UNKNOWN (Skylaax) - ACCEPTED
- layering definitely wasn't what i was expecting for ssh but once i figured it out it was really cool and different
- 20.81s: not sure what these holds are going to. are these for the background synth?
- 48.43s: imo these trills should change to different kinds of trills as the synth changes pitch
- 66.88s: should be a jump because of your layering scheme
- 150.58s: should just be 32nd
- 152.9s: i agree with this being a flam but i don't think it's 3 notes
- 209.32s: really iff about these types of mines. if you want to leave them that's fine but i'm not a fan of them personally.
- 219.27s: i'd step the 16th here

[SKG_Scintill]

Originally Posted by Fission

- 27.55s: missing 32nd (possibly intentional if you are stepping just vocals?)

No, you're right. Missed that. Would be difficult to fit in there though.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 101.84s: i don't think this should be a jump. also in this section, i would suggest trying to pr the jumps to that bell instrument.

Probably, it's the only of the softer snare hits that I somehow still made a jump. You could remove the up arrow from that jump.
Jumps to the xylophone would make it a very big spike; the section already is quite a spike.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 149.28s: missing 32nd

True. Could be any grace note. Luxury issue.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 197.14s: can't figure out what this 32nd is going to

Slide, not an actual note. Can agree that it would also work without.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 287.01s: misrhythm

Didn't want to rainbow. If anything it's a missing 32nd at 287.248s. Could add an up arrow there if you like.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 334.93s to 335.22s: should be 32nds

Disagreed, made them 24ths for a reason :P
They have a bit of a swing to them, 24ths depict that rhythm more accurately, the last 32nds are to the guitar.

Gotta say though, that's mighty thorough and patient of you.

[Wafles]

Originally Posted by Fission

i also need to confer with nathan about turn back the time since i may be slightly biased about some things

ok cool
its reallly hard to explain my layering choices towards the end of the file btw so I'm expecting some confusion here. basically I just put stuff down that felt right in terms of the flow of the song and didn't precisely layer according to noises if that makes sense. I would understand if this warrants a reject

[ScylaX]

Originally Posted by Fission

UNKNOWN (Skylaax) - ACCEPTED
- layering definitely wasn't what i was expecting for ssh but once i figured it out it was really cool and different

!!!!

Originally Posted by Fission

- 150.58s: should just be 32nd
- 152.9s: i agree with this being a flam but i don't think it's 3 notes
- 219.27s: i'd step the 16th here

Got it.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 20.81s: not sure what these holds are going to. are these for the background synth?

Yes they are, I wanted to emphasize them on the final measure (because the notes of the "impactful bass" gets longer) but given the context it indeed may make the whole layering quite disorienting. I'll change that, I guess it's too inconsistent, ultimately.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 66.88s: should be a jump because of your layering scheme

Well on this part I wanted to emphasize the "trill" synth in the background while keeping the impact of the basses at first, and then after the "breakdown", change the kind of layering, that time focusing on the second bass guitar + the same "impactful" basses to not make it redundant.

Originally Posted by Fission

- 209.32s: really iff about these types of mines. if you want to leave them that's fine but i'm not a fan of them personally.

Reading this got me an idea of how to make these mines not awkward while improving the impact of 4th note. I'll change that.