10-27-2006, 11:35 PM
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Location: OH
Age: 39
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Re: Two-Faced
Keep it up mead.
One bit of petty word use I've noticed; Complement is like two things completing something else. Compliment is "you're hair looks nice today." I think you used it wrong twice XD. But then I thought it was just a symbolic "error" to denote how these personalities complement each other. Great story. |
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