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The reason the pages are numbered is because a friend of mine is doing pictures, and it will be in picture book format.
Everyone I know found it amusing. Tell me what you think. Sugguestions/improvements. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Star Student" by Michael Gettings Page 1-2 This is Jane. Shes in the second grade! She loves school. This week, she is the "Star Student!". Page 3-4 She gets cookies at lunch and she gets to tell her whole class about her family. It was the best week ever. Page 5-6 Soon, too soon, the week was over. It was another childs turn to be the "Star Student". Page 7-8 Jane didn't like this. It made her angry. Very angry. Page 9-10 Jane did the math: with the number of students in her class, she wouldn't get to be "Star Student" again for the rest of the year! Unless... Unless something happens. Page 11-12 Jane started small. 3-4 kids got "sick" at lunch one day and had to go home. Page 13-14 They never came back. Page 15-16 It looked like an illness... And thanks to the science kit that Jane had gotten for Christmas, it was virtually untraceable. Page 17-18 On student "fell" off of the monkey bars. Page 19-20 Another "fell" onto a pair of scissors. Page 21-22 Soon, there were no more then ten classmates in her class! Jane was very happy... Page 23-24 Until the men in blue started watching her class. They took Adam away. Adam was always a trouble maker. Page 25-26 No one suspected her. Not little ole' Jane! Page 27-28 It was time for her to be "Star Student!" again! And now, she knew just what she was going to do. Page 29-30 She got cookies at lunch, but instead of talking about her family... Page 31-32 She talked about how much fun it was "becoming" "Star Student!" again. Page 33-34 When the men in white came to take her to the padded room, all she could do was smile. Page 35 And it was the best week ever. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks! Mal
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