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Old 10-14-2003, 03:42 PM   #1
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Default "Star Student" By Michael Gettings

The reason the pages are numbered is because a friend of mine is doing pictures, and it will be in picture book format.

Everyone I know found it amusing.

Tell me what you think. Sugguestions/improvements.


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"Star Student" by Michael Gettings


Page 1-2

This is Jane. Shes in the second grade! She loves school. This week, she is the "Star Student!".

Page 3-4

She gets cookies at lunch and she gets to tell her whole class about her family.
It was the best week ever.

Page 5-6

Soon, too soon, the week was over. It was another childs turn to be the "Star Student".

Page 7-8

Jane didn't like this. It made her angry. Very angry.

Page 9-10

Jane did the math: with the number of students in her class, she wouldn't get to be "Star Student" again for the rest of the year! Unless... Unless something happens.

Page 11-12

Jane started small. 3-4 kids got "sick" at lunch one day and had to go home.

Page 13-14

They never came back.

Page 15-16

It looked like an illness... And thanks to the science kit that Jane had gotten for Christmas, it was virtually untraceable.

Page 17-18

On student "fell" off of the monkey bars.

Page 19-20

Another "fell" onto a pair of scissors.

Page 21-22

Soon, there were no more then ten classmates in her class! Jane was very happy...

Page 23-24

Until the men in blue started watching her class. They took Adam away. Adam was always a trouble maker.

Page 25-26

No one suspected her. Not little ole' Jane!

Page 27-28

It was time for her to be "Star Student!" again! And now, she knew just what she was going to do.

Page 29-30

She got cookies at lunch, but instead of talking about her family...

Page 31-32

She talked about how much fun it was "becoming" "Star Student!" again.

Page 33-34

When the men in white came to take her to the padded room, all she could do was smile.

Page 35

And it was the best week ever.

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Thanks!

Mal
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