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07-16-2005, 04:03 PM
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lil j the bad b-word
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: nj
Age: 35
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A lot of your punctuation and grammar is off, I'd have someone who's good at that stuff go through it and fix/revise things. I didn't even read it(sorry), but I skimmed it very, VERY briefly and found 3 mistakes with that kind of stuff already.
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