There she is!!!(flash animation + my little something)

[Soldat_of_life]

A flash animation series has just come to its end. I wanted to thank the person who made me laugh and cry quite a bit. Placed before certain parts are the flash animations that are represented by those parts. Be sure to check them out to see if I managed to bring out the important aspects of that animation within my poem below. Happy journeying through more than 4 years of animation in the making. In green beforehand is something I wrote to the author on his BBS.

Here are the flash animations in question that the person made (or you can click on these same links below in the thank you message below in my text, these being only for quicker access for those who don't have time to read below).

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/161181
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/224148
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/224148
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/442805
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/474311

Original website: www.sambakza.net


This is what I wrote to the person who made these animations.

Here is a little something to say thank you one last time. It may not be as perfectly refined as your flash animations, and it doesn't rhyme as well as I would want it to, but here is a little something that I wrote after watching ''There She Is!! final step - Imagine''. I hope you like it.


There she is!

Here we stand after all this fun,
Now that all is said and done,
Could we ever try to see,
A work that has such sincere beauty.

And yet we know that all will be,
Deep within our hearts to free.
Contained inside memories,
Forever anchored by carrots and fishies. (the word fishies doesn’t exist, but for translation, it’s the word fish transformed so that it would rhyme. It could be a form of slang)

I call upon you one last time,
Journeyman of mine. (Amalloc being the journeyman, along with all those who helped him make ‘’There she is!’’)
To rock our lives,
And make us feel that life isn’t just made up of halves. (Often we see life in a good or a bad way, always forgetting that both always exist. When we are sad, happiness can exist. When we are happy, sadness still can come up.)

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/161181

Confusion seemed to be the first act,
That of step 1 as a matter of fact.
There were no others like it,
That blew the minds of those lost in violence and hate.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/224148

Then came the aftermath of a sensation,
Vivid colors and fast paced action.
A race for friendship hand in hand,
Possibilities going beyond what had been possibly planned.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/442805

Life went on and time went by,
Dust settled down yet our hopes were high.
You didn't give in after many hardships,
Love bloomed through your finger tips.
Without regrets all was gambled,
But consequences would soon follow.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/456643

And then violence and hate showed its ugly face,
Pouring out of a society in disgrace.
Despair and frustration blinding their minds,
All seemed to be lost in confusion of all kinds,
But a twist of events brought something precious...

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/474311

Finally,
Courageously,
Masterfully,
Emotionally,
Truthfully,
You brought an end to it all.
Tears flowing freely with eyes set upon your final plea.
You have showed that all is not just darkness.
Nor did you show light at its brightest.
Simply the ups and downs of what life has to offer.
In the dreams that humanity shares,
Only one symbol can face all that is.
Faith in oneself.
Desire for better times.
Doing one's best.
Trusting those close to you.
Never giving up.

..and that event that you brought to all the WORLD,
Through the internet that is so vast.
This thing that none can go against that you brought us,
is...

HOPE


THE END





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P.S.: Since I didn't find a ''poetry'' section, I dub this thread a place to just check out this flash animation and if by any chance you wanna take a look at the secondary aspect of this post, the poem, you can always write something that you thought about it. There.