another poem made by be (an unfinished project)

[imajrockette]

poem-

Left to die,Trying to scream,
Pain engulfs her and she
can hardly breathe.

He who caused her pain
watches her life slip
away.He smiles contently
as she lies on the floor in vain.

Tears fill her eyes and
run down her face, Her love for
him will never erase.

She doesn't want to die.
not here,not now...Life is
to precious,Shes to young
to die.She watches her life
flash before her eyes.

She hears his voice as he
sings his sweet lullaby:

Hush a bye baby,It's time to go,
Bloody white roses dripping slow,
Darkness is all that you see,It's
time for you to die,My sweet baby.







i tryed to put the advice that i got to use on one of my old unfinished projects.i hope its better than before.i tryed to make it good and it was difficult to think up of the last part but i hope you like it and please give constuctive critism please and thank you.
i hope this is better than my other poems.i did try on this one and if it isnt good then i will try even harder the next time i write another one.thank you all for the help and have a great day.