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05-31-2014, 08:08 AM | #1 |
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One of my submissions for march/april
Yo!
My files for january/feb weren't that good, so I was wondering if anybody would be interested in looking at one of my march/april submissions and judging it. Xiz already gave me some nice feedback, and I fixed everything accordingly I just want to know the opinion of more people. The file itself isn't oriented much around PR, but more on individual sounds. The file doesn't vary alot in melodies and such, but the sounds are all very different and interesting so I decided to place my notes based on those sounds. The reason I made a thread and didn't PM alot of people is because, alot of people don't really react to PM's . Here is the link for those interested: EDIT: I changed alot of the file and it looks alot different now, I took alot of tidus said and changed it. here is the link to the new version http://www.mediafire.com/download/2v...M0nkeyz%29.rar Last edited by M0nkeyz; 05-31-2014 at 11:47 AM.. |
05-31-2014, 09:46 AM | #2 |
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Re: One of my submissions for march/april
Okay, I'll bite. I think I have a few things I can point out that you might benefit from changing.
etc. The file is just missing a lot and could benefit from some more time put into it. My first suggestion is go back through and put some steps to those sounds that you ignored. My second suggestion is go back through and decide on a very specific layering scheme. For the most part, if there are two sounds at once or a single sound is exceedingly loud, there should probably be a jump. I hope this helped you out some, and if other peeps, ie actual judges, would like to weigh in they may have more thoughtful things to say. Good luck and have fun! One other thing: if you aren't already, try to regularly playtest your own files. Assuming they're within your playing ability, something may look pretty in the editor but play like total crap haha. Last edited by Tidus810; 05-31-2014 at 09:49 AM.. |
05-31-2014, 10:04 AM | #3 |
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Re: One of my submissions for march/april
Hey man, thanks for the input the reason I didn't put jumps on the loud sounds is because I decided to give a single note to each individual sound. otherwise I would end up with hands in some parts and I don't like hands in the file I don't think it suits the soothing character of the file.
I did use a layering scheme except for the 32nd's they are kinda random, but I did forget a few notes and maybe some ghost notes, but I'll have to check later. Thanks for the input man, appreciate it. Edit: Also yeah, I regularly playtest my files, but this file is kinda easy so I didn't notice how it might be heavy on the right hand :P. Might vary it up a bit. |
05-31-2014, 10:14 AM | #4 |
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Re: One of my submissions for march/april
Tidus pretty much nailed it.
I saw a lot of ghost notes and unnecessary jumps as well as places where there should be notes and there aren't.
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