08-12-2016, 07:15 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2014
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My first short film :D
Hey, since I know most of you are really supportive and an awesome community, I would like you guys to constructively criticize my short film! <3
Click here to watch! <3 |
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08-12-2016, 08:37 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Paradise
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Re: My first short film :D
okay, only criticism; get a storyboard together before you start recording. you've got great editing software and it was approached quite professionally but I have no idea what I just watched or why. GTA yeah cool, cool song, cool intro, yeah cool cool. but what was the point? blowing shit up? exciting stuff.
You've got great potential, and have earned yourself a subscriber but I'd like to see a little more thought put into your videos. actually, looking at your other videos you've definitely got your shit together. looking forward to seeing more from you in the future  Last edited by Mourningfall; 08-12-2016 at 08:41 AM.. |
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08-12-2016, 06:50 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2014
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Re: My first short film :D
Thanks Mourningfall! I really appreciate it. <3
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