Rhyming Story

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 08:57 PM

Please read before posting here!
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(Please do NOT edit posts once you've made them, as this can cause errors in the rhyming of the story, TY!)

Here's how it's gonna go. Each segment of the story (each post, in other words) will consist of two lines. The first line must rhyme with the LAST line in the thread. For example:

(Last line in the thread)
Today is a lovely day for trying to create games on the games board.

(Your post could be something like)
Here comes the Hunter, though, taking a lock from his hoard.

After you have added your first line, you can then create any line you wish to add to the story, for example:

(Your own, free line)
He seals this stories fate, as he thinks it is lame.

It would then be the next persons job to follow suit, first creating a line which rhymes:

It is now locked forever, deemed not a game.

Followed by, of course, a line of that persons choosing. I will begin the story:
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Tommy was an ordinary school kid, out to have some fun.

**Matrixdude** · 06-17-2007, 09:01 PM

When, from his pocket, he pulled out a gun!

You might wonder what he did after this.

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 09:03 PM

Well, he took a shot, but missed.

His target, you see, was a small bumblebee.

V3T_ddrultramix3 · 06-17-2007, 09:54 PM

But the bumblebee was too hard to see.

The bullet missed, but hit a little kid.

**Matrixdude** · 06-17-2007, 10:00 PM

I really wonder what that bullet did.

It went through his chest and in his heart...

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 10:04 PM

And he made like a dead person, and began to fart.

The sirens were blaring, the police had been called!

V3T_ddrultramix3 · 06-17-2007, 10:06 PM

But before that could happen, the kid's head was to be sawed!

The poor little kid had no defence.

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 10:14 PM

The blood that followed was quite immense!

By this time the police were drawing nearer...

V3T_ddrultramix3 · 06-17-2007, 10:17 PM

When they got there, a cop bit off the kid's ear!!!!

(fun thread!)

Everyone close by was shocked into a coma...

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 11:23 PM

This was a gruesome scene, set within Oklahoma...

Tommy decided he'd bolt it for home...

jugglinguy · 06-17-2007, 11:34 PM

While running to his house we was attacked by a gnome.

The gnome pulled out a knife and asked "any last words?"

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 11:41 PM

Suddenly, flapping and emerged a flock of birds!

Tommy set them loose, from the inside of his trousers...

jugglinguy · 06-17-2007, 11:43 PM

by unzipping his pants and the birds said "wowzorz"

The birds, you see, were computer geeks

Bamboozler · 06-17-2007, 11:49 PM

The gnome, of course, thought all of them were freaks!

"Screw this town, I'm gonna knife someone else!"

V3T_ddrultramix3 · 06-18-2007, 01:03 AM

"Then I'll say some gibberish, like "toonafunawelse!"
(WTF? Hard rhyming words, Bamboozler.)
The goblin went to St. Louis, which is where V3T_ddrultramix3 lives,

Bamboozler · 06-18-2007, 11:03 AM

The action was intense, a thrill it did give,

But now a new threat... a dinosaur appeared!

V3T_ddrultramix3 · 06-18-2007, 11:22 AM

And appeared with it, a sheep, fully sheared!

The dino tore down buildings, and broke the Arch in two,

Bamboozler · 06-18-2007, 12:29 PM

"ROAR" Bellowed the dino, "this is quite pleasing to do!"

The army was soon called, tanks leading the way...

jugglinguy · 06-18-2007, 01:22 PM

suddenly king kong came and moved with a sway

King kong and the dino teamed up, in case you didn't know...

Bamboozler · 06-18-2007, 01:25 PM

The chances of survival were now awfully low...

Suddenly, *swoosh*! A masked figure entered the battle!

06-17-2007, 08:57 PM	#1
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Rhyming Story Please read before posting here! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (Please do NOT edit posts once you've made them, as this can cause errors in the rhyming of the story, TY!) Here's how it's gonna go. Each segment of the story (each post, in other words) will consist of two lines. The first line must rhyme with the LAST line in the thread. For example: (Last line in the thread) Today is a lovely day for trying to create games on the games board. (Your post could be something like) Here comes the Hunter, though, taking a lock from his hoard. After you have added your first line, you can then create any line you wish to add to the story, for example: (Your own, free line) He seals this stories fate, as he thinks it is lame. It would then be the next persons job to follow suit, first creating a line which rhymes: It is now locked forever, deemed not a game. Followed by, of course, a line of that persons choosing. I will begin the story: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tommy was an ordinary school kid, out to have some fun. Last edited by Bamboozler; 06-17-2007 at 11:38 PM..

06-17-2007, 09:01 PM	#2
Matrixdude And She Screams My Name Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Columbus, Ohio Age: 31 Posts: 1,351	Re: Rhyming Story When, from his pocket, he pulled out a gun! You might wonder what he did after this. __________________

06-17-2007, 09:03 PM	#3
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story Well, he took a shot, but missed. His target, you see, was a small bumblebee.

06-17-2007, 09:54 PM	#4
V3T_ddrultramix3 FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: I can't tell you, I'm playing Hide and Go Fall Off A Cliff! Posts: 307	Re: Rhyming Story But the bumblebee was too hard to see. The bullet missed, but hit a little kid. __________________ Awsome Contest. Enter Here. , now!

06-17-2007, 10:00 PM	#5
Matrixdude And She Screams My Name Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Columbus, Ohio Age: 31 Posts: 1,351	Re: Rhyming Story I really wonder what that bullet did. It went through his chest and in his heart... __________________

06-17-2007, 10:04 PM	#6
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story And he made like a dead person, and began to fart. The sirens were blaring, the police had been called!

06-17-2007, 10:06 PM	#7
V3T_ddrultramix3 FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: I can't tell you, I'm playing Hide and Go Fall Off A Cliff! Posts: 307	Re: Rhyming Story But before that could happen, the kid's head was to be sawed! The poor little kid had no defence. __________________ Awsome Contest. Enter Here. , now!

06-17-2007, 10:14 PM	#8
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story The blood that followed was quite immense! By this time the police were drawing nearer...

06-17-2007, 10:17 PM	#9
V3T_ddrultramix3 FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: I can't tell you, I'm playing Hide and Go Fall Off A Cliff! Posts: 307	Re: Rhyming Story When they got there, a cop bit off the kid's ear!!!! (fun thread!) Everyone close by was shocked into a coma... __________________ Awsome Contest. Enter Here. , now! Last edited by V3T_ddrultramix3; 06-17-2007 at 11:24 PM..

06-17-2007, 11:23 PM	#10
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story This was a gruesome scene, set within Oklahoma... Tommy decided he'd bolt it for home... Last edited by Bamboozler; 06-17-2007 at 11:39 PM.. Reason: V3T, don't change it after you post! :P

06-17-2007, 11:41 PM	#12
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story Suddenly, flapping and emerged a flock of birds! Tommy set them loose, from the inside of his trousers...

06-17-2007, 11:49 PM	#14
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story The gnome, of course, thought all of them were freaks! "Screw this town, I'm gonna knife someone else!"

06-18-2007, 01:03 AM	#15
V3T_ddrultramix3 FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: I can't tell you, I'm playing Hide and Go Fall Off A Cliff! Posts: 307	Re: Rhyming Story "Then I'll say some gibberish, like "toonafunawelse!" (WTF? Hard rhyming words, Bamboozler.) The goblin went to St. Louis, which is where V3T_ddrultramix3 lives, __________________ Awsome Contest. Enter Here. , now!

06-18-2007, 11:03 AM	#16
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story The action was intense, a thrill it did give, But now a new threat... a dinosaur appeared!

06-18-2007, 11:22 AM	#17
V3T_ddrultramix3 FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: I can't tell you, I'm playing Hide and Go Fall Off A Cliff! Posts: 307	Re: Rhyming Story And appeared with it, a sheep, fully sheared! The dino tore down buildings, and broke the Arch in two, __________________ Awsome Contest. Enter Here. , now!

06-18-2007, 12:29 PM	#18
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story "ROAR" Bellowed the dino, "this is quite pleasing to do!" The army was soon called, tanks leading the way...

06-18-2007, 01:25 PM	#20
Bamboozler Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Flamer Central (FFR) Age: 33 Posts: 155	Re: Rhyming Story The chances of survival were now awfully low... Suddenly, swoosh! A masked figure entered the battle!

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