01-6-2017, 12:36 PM
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Celestial Harbor
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Celestial Harbor
Age: 30
Posts: 6,156
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Re: BOAT 2 (Bursts of a Teitoku 2 - Submissions open until Feb 1st)
woke up in the middle of the night to make that post lmfao
update - added links to the op
Oceans of Regret - Actually pretty solid, bar some choices i disagree with in the intro, and some jump/hand usage that jumped out at me immediately. I think the biggest thing about this song is that it's 6 minutes, and it kinda just stagnates - being able to click around in the song and have the file look and sound very similar to other sections is just going to bore players in the end. It'd probably move to accept if like around 2+ minutes could be cut out, and I'd also go in depth with some of the layering things
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