[Nullifidian]

Y'all motherbleepers need fundamentals in your life

Originally Posted by Alioth

Here's a little sketch over of your perspective drawing with some notes:

Originally Posted by mirelle94

Here's some quick edits to your speedpaint so that your values aren't all over the place and focus is more on the groudon:



As for long gone and mollo, also delve deeper into perspective and anatomy fundamentals. It'll help you construct a realistic image (even if it's a cartoony style) because the spherical objects in longgone's drawing for example are very distorted (among other things).

Seriously everyone, fundamentals are important