Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

[LaterDays]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

Oh don't get me wrong, I appreciate yours and Choof's posts. They've been insightful. Posts like Razors are just unprofessional. No reasoning, no insight, nothing to work on. Purely an insult. If people like that would expand on their thoughts, nothing would have been brought up.

[Xiz]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

Oh don't get me wrong, I appreciate yours and AlexDest's posts. They've been insightful. Posts like Razors are just unprofessional. No reasoning, no insight, nothing to work on. Purely an insult. If people like that would expand on their thoughts, nothing would have been brought up.

If you want my opinion, your music lacks filler. You are getting the start of what really makes dubstep unique, but to be honest it needs to be filled. It doesn't really go anywhere either, and try expanding on either a different (or multiple melodies / counter melodies) or key changes or something. Just because you have a sick wub sound doesn't make good dubstep.

Also, your percussion needs work. Make it unique, interesting, and have it change. Honestly, i can predict exactly what your percussion will do... and thats a big turn off for me.

Keep trying, and don't give up.



tl;dr

Don't believe in yourself. Believe in me, the Xiz who believes in you.

[LaterDays]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

If you want my opinion, your music lacks filler. You are getting the start of what really makes dubstep unique, but to be honest it needs to be filled. It doesn't really go anywhere either, and try expanding on either a different (or multiple melodies / counter melodies) or key changes or something. Just because you have a sick wub sound doesn't make good dubstep.

Also, your percussion needs work. Make it unique, interesting, and have it change. Honestly, i can predict exactly what your percussion will do... and thats a big turn off for me

THIS I can work with. Thank you.

[Xiz]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

<3


Post your next track when you are done, or pm it to me. I'll help you out.

Also, take a listen to pretty much any monstercat artist. Try to do what they do. Listen to what they do, what they change, and how they keep the music going.

[LaterDays]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

Honestly, Dubstep isn't my home genre to begin with, orchestral is where it all started for me. Only recently, have I delved into this form of art. two songs i believe? I do have another that has been finished since Fixxit, it's about 7 minutes long. Not too heavy on the dubstep side however, and there are various parts I am unhappy with but posted anyways for the feedback. I'll message it to you.

[Zaevod]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

I'd just like to make an observation. While I obviously agree with the usefulness of constructive criticism (it helped me improve a lot in the past year), there's also the type of criticism laid out by people who have a clear bias against you, for some reason. The type of bullshit criticism that is "I'll just pick apart whatever this person made, ignore everything that's good about it and try to find as many problems as I can, even if they might not actually be there". Or just plain insults. And, yes, there are people who do that, here.

[Bronely]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

The intro to this is almost identical to that of "Big Boss" by Doctor P.
Uhh, whoops. I didn't realize how old this thread was.

[choof]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

there is so much clipping in this track it's like a barber shop in compton

good quote

[Bronely]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

good quote

Good reply to a good quote.

[rushyrulz]

Re: Requesting my song to be stepped for FFR

crisp edges

Great, now I'm hungry.