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  • O!J
    Banned
    • Feb 2012
    • 11

    #31
    Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

    so whats your opinion on fang of critias atm (this is c1004a btw)
    i personally think the song is pretty repetitive too
    just scrap it from the conditional list

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    • Victorique
      FFR Player
      • Mar 2011
      • 215

      #32
      Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

      fortissimo -the ultimate crisis- (Kaneh)
      Standard
      Good as an easy chart. Yes
      Heavy
      Good file for intermediate players, it was ok, kinda unreplayable for good players since there isn't much going on, maybe it's me that expected a lot more of this. Anyways. Yes


      Melting Time (Kaneh)
      Standard

      Good as an easy chart. Yes
      Heavy
      Yuyoyuppe :'). Fine is nice and replayable. I would've done some parts differently but it's ok. Yes

      Phantasia Ballad (Gundam-Dude)
      Standard

      Yes
      Heavy
      OLDOLDOLDOLD... Prehistoric file. Cool file. Yes

      Poinsettia (SonicX)
      Heavy

      M24 you omitted some steppable sounds that could've made the song better.
      M38-M39 section 16ths are technically incorrect.
      167.750 and 171.750 ommited sound
      M45+ Section is incorrect and different from the first ones that are the same section (see M19). I understand you're trying to focus on bass but, it really isn't accurate and messes up the whole section.
      M74 same section than M70 different stops ?
      309.750 Missed sound
      363.250 16ths should start 1 8th after.
      M96 same as M38
      405.000+ it's a 12ths section
      Recheck some parts of the file overall. No

      Secret Garden (LC)
      File is a bit lackluster for a 2min file, it drags a lot honestly since there isn't much variation, otherwise good file. I liked the ending . Yes, come back with an easy chart

      Two Faced Lovers (Kaneh)
      Standard

      Good as an easy chart
      Oni
      I hate this song. I can't enjoy the file in the slightest. Yes

      Vallista (LongGone)
      <3. Really fun file, replayable as ****. Yes

      Sorry I haven't updated in a while. I haven't been in mood for stepmania. I'll probably close this when I finish my files since there isn't much activity going on lately (Around first week of June). Please ppl start finishing your easy charts thank you .
      Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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      • Victorique
        FFR Player
        • Mar 2011
        • 215

        #33
        Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

        Wow It's been a while I have touched this.

        Acchi de Kocchi De (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
        Easy charts

        All good
        Oni
        You may want to add some hands to louder sounds. Ex M1 M2 M3, M15 ,etc, since the hands at the end come out of nowhere, compared to the rest of the song. You don't really need to add them all over the place, just in some specific places, it will also make the file a lot more interesting. M19+ section is kinda iffy since you're trying to mix vocals and the other sound, and changing them. It would be a lot better if you concentrated in only one of them. Jumps could've been added to claps in that section, and you could've layered those xylophone burst sounds, but that's my personal preference. Good file, fun to play.
        Yes

        Bad Apple (Erebus Lux)
        Pattern changes at the beggining don't make the song more replayable (though this isn't that important).
        Mines get annoying especially with fakes (nobody uses sm5 yet so don't bother using them), it makes the file tedious.
        Some rythmic inconsistencies with 16ths, with sometimes adding bg 16ths randomly.
        Too much holdspam, annoying.
        Too long.
        Most unsteppable song ever for 4key. One thing is making a decent chart for it and another is to make it replayable. Unfortunately no one can do the second one in 4key for this song.
        No


        Hello (Mazei)
        You barely made any changes regarding bass sounds i told you.
        Also focusing on hands for piano it's kinda bad since there are more stronger sounds during the song that can be hands instead of piano chords since they're not loud enough compared to others.
        Song is kinda lackluster in general as I said before.
        No

        Koyubi no Paradox (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
        Ez Charts
        All good
        Oni
        Maybe my only complaint with this is that guitar miniholds are kinda inconsistent before the chorus since you're mixing guitar sounds that you're stepping with ones you don't which makes it look weird, it isn't bad it just feels kinda weird when playing. Good file, i would've stepped it more densily but you normally go for more minimalistic layerings. Yes

        Memoria (Higguy)
        Heavy

        Inconsistent jump, hand, hold and 16th layering (everything lol) overall. Try harder next time plz. No

        Miracle Melody (XanoX)
        I'm not really feeling a lot of your hands and jacks, mines get annoying and holds get inconsistent at parts. Tbh i quitted halfway due to a lot of inconsistencies in the file. Also mines get really annoying. No

        Neurotoxin (LongGone)
        <3

        Sayonara Sekai (aloola)
        Oni

        File is fine, song drags a bit too much, at least it ends at the right time. I hope i played the correct chart lol xd. Ez chart plz

        Short But Seems Long, Time of Our Life (aloola)
        Wow really nice simfile for being 4 min long. I would've layered some parts more heavily personally, especially to make the file a bit more fluid and similar in difficulty to the only "hard" part of the file. Anyway really fun, I'm willing to accept this even if you don't make an ez chart for being long, but try to make it if you can. Yes

        QUEUE AT 56 FILES, ABSOLUTE DEADLINE SATURDAY 7/7
        Last edited by Victorique; 06-27-2012, 08:52 PM.
        Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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        IF YOU WERE RONNED TOMORROW, I WOULDN’T GO TO UR TABLE CUZ I’D BE IN FURITEN FOR RIICHIING DA MOTHA ****ER THAT RONNED YOU!
        WE TRUE TOMODACHIS. WE RON TOGETHER. WE TSUMO TOGETHER
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        • XxMidigamixX
          FFR Player
          • Nov 2010
          • 2040

          #34
          Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

          .________. sending a file right now (assuming that remixes from japan games are allowed haha)
          Last edited by XxMidigamixX; 06-27-2012, 09:40 PM.
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          • Victorique
            FFR Player
            • Mar 2011
            • 215

            #35
            Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

            Originally posted by XxMidigamixX
            .________. sending a file right now (assuming that remixes from japan games are allowed haha)
            Yes they are
            Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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            IF YOU WERE RONNED TOMORROW, I WOULDN’T GO TO UR TABLE CUZ I’D BE IN FURITEN FOR RIICHIING DA MOTHA ****ER THAT RONNED YOU!
            WE TRUE TOMODACHIS. WE RON TOGETHER. WE TSUMO TOGETHER
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            • XxMidigamixX
              FFR Player
              • Nov 2010
              • 2040

              #36
              Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

              Originally posted by Victorique
              Yes they are
              cool :3
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              • Lynn.
                FFR Player
                • Dec 2010
                • 114

                #37
                Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                7/7.. my first term's final exam ends 7/9
                Lynn's solo filez

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                • XxMidigamixX
                  FFR Player
                  • Nov 2010
                  • 2040

                  #38
                  Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                  Originally posted by Lynn.
                  7/7.. my first term's final exam ends 7/9
                  rip
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                  • Victorique
                    FFR Player
                    • Mar 2011
                    • 215

                    #39
                    Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                    Originally posted by Lynn.
                    7/7.. my first term's final exam ends 7/9
                    I can make 1 or 2 exceptions especially I'm still trying to get ppl to make easy charts, so release will take a while. But I'm not gonna make a review batch again after that or I'm not gonna accept files w/o easy charts.
                    Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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                    IF YOU WERE RONNED TOMORROW, I WOULDN’T GO TO UR TABLE CUZ I’D BE IN FURITEN FOR RIICHIING DA MOTHA ****ER THAT RONNED YOU!
                    WE TRUE TOMODACHIS. WE RON TOGETHER. WE TSUMO TOGETHER
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                    • who_cares973
                      FFR Player
                      • Aug 2006
                      • 15407

                      #40
                      Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                      oh man i have some anime to step for this

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                      • Victorique
                        FFR Player
                        • Mar 2011
                        • 215

                        #41
                        Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                        Originally posted by who_cares973
                        oh man i have some anime to step for this
                        Better hurry, last day :O)
                        Last edited by Victorique; 07-7-2012, 05:43 AM.
                        Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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                        IF YOU WERE RONNED TOMORROW, I WOULDN’T GO TO UR TABLE CUZ I’D BE IN FURITEN FOR RIICHIING DA MOTHA ****ER THAT RONNED YOU!
                        WE TRUE TOMODACHIS. WE RON TOGETHER. WE TSUMO TOGETHER
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                        • Victorique
                          FFR Player
                          • Mar 2011
                          • 215

                          #42
                          Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Closed)

                          Submissions are now CLOSED only files I will accept are the ones I already reserved slots to
                          Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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                          IF YOU WERE RONNED TOMORROW, I WOULDN’T GO TO UR TABLE CUZ I’D BE IN FURITEN FOR RIICHIING DA MOTHA ****ER THAT RONNED YOU!
                          WE TRUE TOMODACHIS. WE RON TOGETHER. WE TSUMO TOGETHER
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                          • Victorique
                            FFR Player
                            • Mar 2011
                            • 215

                            #43
                            Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                            Atama No Taisou (SonicX)
                            Too many difficulty spikes for me to approve this. I see you've improved but most of your files lack focus on if it's hard or not and you lose focus on jump consistency. If you make an easy file don't even layer those bursts, and if you're making a hard file, some parts lack layering and it's just too simplistic. No

                            Fearless Hero (Lynn)
                            Holy CRAP! Great file . Yes

                            Haereticus (Dark Raven-G vs. Suzaku-G)
                            Just WAY overlayered. No

                            Atama no Taisou (SonicX)
                            Inconsistent jump layering overall. No

                            Koisuru ☆ Uchu Sensou!! (Lynn)
                            YES to both charts

                            My Friend Mudkip (Midigami)
                            Cool file, some jacks, bursts during hold patterns are a bit awkward to hit. Personally I would replace those quads at the beginning with mines or tone them down cause they're a bit too much imo. Yes

                            Plastic Mind (Kaneh)
                            No comments. Great file. Yes


                            Sally (Select) (Mazei)
                            It just feels too overlayered, with hands and freeze usage. Some weird jack patterns here and there. No

                            THE FALLEN (Dark Raven-G)
                            Way overlayered. No

                            You & Me (aloola)
                            LESS files MORE easy charts. Yes

                            THE ONES THAT NEED TO FINISH EASY CHARTS PLEASE DO IT, I WON'T BITCH TO EACH ONE ABOUT IT. I UPDATED THE FILES THAT NEED GFX IN FIRST POST.
                            Last edited by Victorique; 07-8-2012, 12:55 AM.
                            Originally posted by Gundam-Dude
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                            IF YOU WERE RONNED TOMORROW, I WOULDN’T GO TO UR TABLE CUZ I’D BE IN FURITEN FOR RIICHIING DA MOTHA ****ER THAT RONNED YOU!
                            WE TRUE TOMODACHIS. WE RON TOGETHER. WE TSUMO TOGETHER
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                            • XxMidigamixX
                              FFR Player
                              • Nov 2010
                              • 2040

                              #44
                              Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

                              Originally posted by Victorique
                              My Friend Mudkip (Midigami)
                              Cool file, some jacks, bursts during hold patterns are a bit awkward to hit. Personally I would replace those quads at the beginning with mines or tone them down cause they're a bit too much imo. Yes
                              :') I'll fix it up once I get on my comp that has the file xD

                              edit: nvm, I'm a derp lol
                              Last edited by XxMidigamixX; 07-8-2012, 12:10 PM.
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