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Forum: Writing and Literature 03-6-2011, 12:03 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,537
Posted By crumheart32605
Re: Poem: In the sky

This is crap
Forum: Writing and Literature 08-21-2009, 11:15 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,443
Posted By crumheart32605
Re: tell me what you think.

thank you for your feedback :-D
this is a very recent one it isn't very long but if you could please tell me your opinions it would be much appreciated.
also, if there's something you think i...
Forum: Writing and Literature 08-11-2009, 06:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,443
Posted By crumheart32605
tell me what you think.

1.
I've only become this that you have created me to be
My pulse is still synced with the plagues we've reigned onto these
Unworthy victims
To become something more than human we've destroyed...
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-24-2009, 05:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,370
Posted By crumheart32605
poem

We belong to words
They shape, create worlds
Orbs of light, hollowed out
Sailing past the places intended
The evasions you've spoken with bravery
Float and land on a dark star
in your world...
Forum: FFR General Talk 12-31-2007, 02:36 PM
Replies: 361
Views: 15,447
Posted By crumheart32605
Forum: Writing and Literature 10-14-2007, 07:39 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,847
Posted By crumheart32605
Re: Constructive Criticism Please :D

Aright.. well I tried. :/ Hopefully this is improvement but just in case I'm still confusing everyone (though I tried hard not to) I'll explain this one beforehand. :) It's basically about a...
Forum: Writing and Literature 10-14-2007, 07:30 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,847
Posted By crumheart32605
Re: Constructive Criticism Please :D

My apologies if I seemed rude. I don't try to use big words because I want to look intelligent or separate the readers from what I'm trying to say. I really didn't realize that I was making it hard...
Forum: Writing and Literature 10-14-2007, 05:09 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,847
Posted By crumheart32605
Re: Constructive Criticism Please :D

ShastaTwist, umm.. thanks for the criticism, though it wasn't very constructive. As for the mention of necrophilia, the poem was talking about falling in love with someone you can't be with, hence...
Forum: Writing and Literature 10-14-2007, 04:35 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,847
Posted By crumheart32605
Unhappy Constructive Criticism Please :D

Both of these were longer but I was unsure of some of the parts so I cut them. I'm sure I'll get flamed but I was looking for some constructive criticism on how I could make my writing better. I'm...
Forum: FFR Events 08-29-2007, 03:44 PM
Replies: 1,399
Views: 94,187
Posted By crumheart32605
Forum: FFR Songs and Artist Permissions 08-23-2007, 10:03 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,179
Posted By crumheart32605
Cool I need help

I have permission from Cancer From Candy, my boyfriend's band, to use any of their songs. I attempted to create a stepfile and failed miserably. If anyone would be willing to make it for me I would...
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