[Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

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  • jakeyjake7
    FFR Player
    • Jul 2006
    • 343
    #1

    [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

    So here's my latest WIP. This one has been moving surprisingly fast, and I've been feeling abnormally inspired while making this. I actually made the majority of this, around 2 minutes, in one 4 hour sitting, which is record pace considering how slowly I usually finish tunes. Sorry to blueball you with only a taste of breaks, but I've only just gotten to that part! The title is obviously a reference to my EP (Marmalade Cellar) which it will be on.

    I eventually plan on including MANY of my own recorded samples from my new field recorder in this track.

    Dropbox - 404
    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7125010/jump%20in.mp3



    If anyone has any comments on progression, mixing, sample choice etc. at this point, please don't hesitate to tell me.
    Originally posted by tuv
    I enjoy eating my beard
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    • NumiGamer
      FFR Player
      • Aug 2007
      • 337
      #2
      Re: [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

      Pretty sexy, not gonna lie. Can't wait for the full piece =D
      Originally posted by tofurox;
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        • who_cares973
          FFR Player
          • Aug 2006
          • 15407
          #3
          Re: [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

          blue balls oh man

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            • rushyrulz
              Digital Dancing!
              FFR Simfile Author
              FFR Music Producer
              • Feb 2006
              • 12985
              #4
              Re: [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

              Felt like I was in an elevator, way too slow progressing. The end bit was nice though, but still came off as weak to me. Expected something a little heavier than steel guitar and light drums.


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                • who_cares973
                  FFR Player
                  • Aug 2006
                  • 15407
                  #5
                  Re: [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

                  i liked the build up personally. nothing wrong with a long intro as long as the rest of the song makes the wait worth while

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                    • rushyrulz
                      Digital Dancing!
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Feb 2006
                      • 12985
                      #6
                      Re: [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

                      Originally posted by who_cares973
                      i liked the build up personally. nothing wrong with a long intro as long as the rest of the song makes the wait worth while
                      This is absent as of now, so I'm just giving my criticism as is. Even if the body of the song is really good, I don't really see why it needs more than a 1:30 intro.


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                        • DarkbearX
                          Shimose
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          FFR Music Producer
                          • Feb 2006
                          • 1995
                          #7
                          Re: [Breakcore] Padlock - Escaping The Cellar

                          Can't wait for the full thing, this is ****ing awesome so far.

                          Two things irk me though:

                          1) Right off the bat, the lowpass filter is causing some resonance issues to the guitar sample, Turning the Q down (if only temporarily) or compressing those certain frequencies being excited would be a good idea imo.

                          2) The 'end' of the guitar sample is too conspicuous. I would work to make it sound more seamless and things would flow a lot better I think

                          But so far so good. Keep up the great work man.
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