made a Song for a girl i like!

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  • Mans0n
    Sun and Stars
    FFR Music Producer
    • Sep 2006
    • 2907

    #1

    made a Song for a girl i like!

    Any suggestions? I think it sounds pretty good already. But criticsm and feedback always helps. and listen to the whole song, guarantee you will love the end xD.
    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/248176

    edit: i h8 zero bombing fags D:
    Last edited by Mans0n; 06-19-2009, 06:06 PM.
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  • Ice wolf
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2007
    • 852

    #2
    Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

    Pretty cool. Not much to it, but it was good nonetheless.
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    • Johny2by4
      FFR Player
      • Jan 2009
      • 7

      #3
      Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

      Change it up more. add some better synths but other than that it good

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      • Mans0n
        Sun and Stars
        FFR Music Producer
        • Sep 2006
        • 2907

        #4
        Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

        Alrighty, but this is just the start of it, i had a whole other song going ut it sucked and i deleted it and started over. my first song ever with vocals lol. do they sound okay? i need to know what to change or add or do.
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        • Izzy
          Snek
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Jan 2003
          • 9195

          #5
          Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

          Good luck with the girl.

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          • NFD
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2007
            • 4715

            #6
            Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

            That was possibly the worst techno song I've ever, ever heard.

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            • Mans0n
              Sun and Stars
              FFR Music Producer
              • Sep 2006
              • 2907

              #7
              Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

              awwww......
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              • GG_Guru
                Let em' do what they want
                • Mar 2006
                • 3219

                #8
                Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                Originally posted by Izzy
                Good luck with the girl.
                What he said.

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                • Emo_Saur_
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Feb 2007
                  • 2952

                  #9
                  Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                  Something to f**k too?

                  Goodluck
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                  • Vanilla Mnm
                    cavs
                    • Dec 2007
                    • 3258

                    #10
                    Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                    I like it lol

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                    • alster1
                      What is this I don't even
                      • Sep 2006
                      • 948

                      #11
                      Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                      too boring

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                      • Flaming_Dingleberry
                        Everybody gets one.
                        • Jul 2006
                        • 1008

                        #12
                        Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                        The feminine vocals are cool with me, but that black guy voice has got to go, or just say his stupid line 4 times and gtfo. Not the worst techno song I've ever heard, and what's the girl's name?
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                        • phe0nixblade
                          Praise the sun mofo
                          • Sep 2005
                          • 4281

                          #13
                          Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                          was boring up until 1:20 then i was like cool 8)

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                          • Mans0n
                            Sun and Stars
                            FFR Music Producer
                            • Sep 2006
                            • 2907

                            #14
                            Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                            girls voice is a vocal sample sliced, and arranged to my liking, and there is no black, guy i think its a mexican
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                            • Svaz
                              quite clever
                              • Oct 2008
                              • 792

                              #15
                              Re: made a Song for a girl i like!

                              Originally posted by Emo_Saur_
                              Something to f**k too?

                              Goodluck
                              Goddamn, don't even post.

                              Sounds like a darkwave pop song from the 80's maybe? Change the base synth to phoscyon, perhaps. Also back off the high pass filter -- it's implemented in pretty weird spots. It's a bit empty, but rife with potential.

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