Untitled so far but not for long...

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  • Mans0n
    Sun and Stars
    FFR Music Producer
    • Sep 2006
    • 2907
    #1

    Untitled so far but not for long...

    Need your guys help naming this song. Don't really pay attention to the second half of it at like 2:30 where a new song starts. because it will be like a 10 min mix when finished. But need some feedback on how it sounds so far. some pointers and tips on making long tracks. anything helpful is appreciated. and whether or not you like it.
    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/239624
    http://www.facebook.com/?ref=logo#!/Br0wnbread



    Check out my band profile and give it a like! :P
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    • LogicalDefiance
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2009
      • 49
      #2
      Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

      Well to start off with what I liked. I liked the gate you gave the whole intro synth. I loved the whistling sound at 2:01, and I liked the bass you used at 1:25. Also I liked how the song transforms.

      Things to work on(IMO): The intro synth was very dry(try fattening or maybe a little reverb) and I think the intro as a whole was too minimalistic. Adding pads or other light percussion is a good way to give a more full sound without feeling like the bass dropped yet. The bassline that comes in at 1:25 sounds good but I think you should try to raise some higher freqs(150-300ish hz) on it so non-awesome speakers can pick up that sound more.

      Anyways hope I was of help. Cheers.

      CUSTOM MUSIC COMPOSITION & SOUND DESIGN

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        • Erothyme
          FFR Player
          • Jan 2008
          • 2033
          #3
          Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

          I'm not going to name your work for you. :<


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            • Erothyme
              FFR Player
              • Jan 2008
              • 2033
              #4
              Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

              Unless you want to call it Procession of the Dongs


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                • NFD
                  FFR Player
                  • Nov 2007
                  • 4715
                  #5
                  Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

                  You should name it

                  EVERLASTING TRUTH FROM WHICH MY HEART FALLS DEEPLY

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                    • iPatcH
                      Swamp Lemons Rule
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Dec 2004
                      • 3370
                      #6
                      Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

                      I find it funny when people try and use exotic-sounding names for song titles. Stuff that tends to have a lot of X's, Z's or just has an edgey sound to it. Like, EXCURSION or ZETA PHAZON. Just listen to the song and find out what it should be. Think with you heart and feel with your head. 8)
                      put on a donk on it

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                        • Erothyme
                          FFR Player
                          • Jan 2008
                          • 2033
                          #7
                          Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

                          Originally posted by iPatcH
                          Think with your heart and feel with your head.
                          I really need to finish that track.


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                            • Svaz
                              quite clever
                              • Oct 2008
                              • 792
                              #8
                              Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

                              Call it "My Smegma Swiftly Flows"

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                                • Mans0n
                                  Sun and Stars
                                  FFR Music Producer
                                  • Sep 2006
                                  • 2907
                                  #9
                                  Re: Untitled so far but not for long...

                                  Wow lol thanks for the feedback to person who actually reviewed, you know who you are.
                                  and as a whole, i pretty much gave up on this project. am now working on this http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/242192
                                  http://www.facebook.com/?ref=logo#!/Br0wnbread



                                  Check out my band profile and give it a like! :P

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