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  • xferrarix
    FFR Player
    • Mar 2009
    • 1091
    #1

    got incredibly bored so made this

    Life Sucks

    Life once began with light
    then turned into a bunch of crap
    you think you're riding somewhere bright
    and you turn around realizing your back to the same wrap

    think its better? think again ur life sucks
    the life you thought you had is gone
    the life you want to live is something you should chuck
    the life you want is over and done

    women suck forget them
    once it starts it ends
    once it ends it doesnt come back to them
    once it ends it starts again

    life is a wrap
    a long long circle
    a bunch of crap
    forget about the oracle you thought would happen

    life sucks

    k waiting for flames
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    • funmonkey54
      The Chill Keeper
      • Oct 2007
      • 4127
      #2
      Re: got incredibly bored so made this

      It's average.
      Sounds like a 13 year old kid was doing poetry in english class and decided he could get attention if he said his life sucks.
      But yeah, it's average.

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        • xferrarix
          FFR Player
          • Mar 2009
          • 1091
          #3
          Re: got incredibly bored so made this

          by the way i made this in 5 minutes : D thanks for the input
          sigpic

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            • Bolth mannn
              FFR Veteran
              • Aug 2008
              • 2228
              #4
              Re: got incredibly bored so made this

              omgosh so depressing, i almost cried.

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                • Dr Tran
                  Banned
                  • Aug 2008
                  • 1134
                  #5
                  Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                  -_\\\

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                    • Erothyme
                      FFR Player
                      • Jan 2008
                      • 2033
                      #6
                      Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                      hur hur hur you said crap


                      - - - - - -

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                        • nois-or-e
                          SponCon Aficionado
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Mar 2007
                          • 3250
                          #7
                          Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                          Originally posted by Dr Tran
                          -_\\\
                          This.

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                            • xealix
                              One Among The Fence
                              • Feb 2007
                              • 680
                              #8
                              Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                              i think that just made me give up on life

                              I will use musical lyrics for my siggy.
                              "In the cradle we are helpless, but on our feet we are fatal" - The Dear Hunter

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                                • jchinzilla
                                  i like cheese
                                  • Dec 2005
                                  • 2106
                                  #9
                                  Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                                  so what you're saying is....life is an everlasting turd that wraps around in a circle


                                  Last edited by jchinzilla; 04-28-2009, 10:49 AM.

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                                    • nuclearsamurai
                                      huehuehue
                                      • Jul 2007
                                      • 1211
                                      #10
                                      Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                                      Originally posted by Dr Tran
                                      -_\\\
                                      Originally posted by nois-or-e
                                      This.
                                      -_\\\

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                                        • xferrarix
                                          FFR Player
                                          • Mar 2009
                                          • 1091
                                          #11
                                          Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                                          dude ur right!!! honestly i dont think i had any meanings intended in this poem lmfao

                                          ps my english class is starting a poetry unit o boi
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                                            • justin_ator
                                              🥓<strong><span style="col
                                              • Mar 2007
                                              • 7648
                                              #12
                                              Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                                              I hated the poetry unit. Made me want to

                                              -_\\\

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                                                • kitkat9
                                                  FFR Player
                                                  • Feb 2009
                                                  • 87
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: got incredibly bored so made this

                                                  It's good. It could use a little work, punctuation, and maybe a few different word choices. Just to make the flow a little better.

                                                  I'm offened though. Women aren't the only reason relationships suck. What about ignorant men who don't care whether their girlfriend has feeling, or the men that beat their women, and the men who knock women up and never show their face again when they find out the girl is pregnant. You can't put all the blame on our shoulders.

                                                  Other than that it's good and you made a point. =)

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