got incredibly bored so made this

[xferrarix]

Life Sucks

Life once began with light
then turned into a bunch of crap
you think you're riding somewhere bright
and you turn around realizing your back to the same wrap

think its better? think again ur life sucks
the life you thought you had is gone
the life you want to live is something you should chuck
the life you want is over and done

women suck forget them
once it starts it ends
once it ends it doesnt come back to them
once it ends it starts again

life is a wrap
a long long circle
a bunch of crap
forget about the oracle you thought would happen

life sucks

k waiting for flames

[funmonkey54]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

It's average.
Sounds like a 13 year old kid was doing poetry in english class and decided he could get attention if he said his life sucks.
But yeah, it's average.

[xferrarix]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

by the way i made this in 5 minutes : D thanks for the input

[Bolth mannn]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

omgosh so depressing, i almost cried.

[Dr Tran]

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[Erothyme]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

hur hur hur you said crap

[nois-or-e]

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This.

[xealix]

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i think that just made me give up on life

[jchinzilla]

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so what you're saying is....life is an everlasting turd that wraps around in a circle

[nuclearsamurai]

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This.

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[xferrarix]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

dude ur right!!! honestly i dont think i had any meanings intended in this poem lmfao

ps my english class is starting a poetry unit o boi

[justin_ator]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

I hated the poetry unit. Made me want to

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[kitkat9]

Re: got incredibly bored so made this

It's good. It could use a little work, punctuation, and maybe a few different word choices. Just to make the flow a little better.

I'm offened though. Women aren't the only reason relationships suck. What about ignorant men who don't care whether their girlfriend has feeling, or the men that beat their women, and the men who knock women up and never show their face again when they find out the girl is pregnant. You can't put all the blame on our shoulders.

Other than that it's good and you made a point. =)