I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

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  • Erothyme
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2008
    • 2033

    #1

    I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

    Goodbye, dry brush,
    Crumbling at a touch,
    Now brittle, once lush,
    But just briefly such.
    Now flaming to fly
    And unite with the sky,
    You're no different from I,
    No, not very much.

    You never will die,
    You never were born,
    We both keep alive
    As you're keeping me warm.
    You flow through my future,
    Impacting my path,
    And my past flows right into
    Your ash aftermath.

    Goodbye, dry brush.
    Making habit of change,
    You partake in the rush
    Of returning to flame,
    Combusting to rise
    And to light up my eyes,
    You confine your demise
    To mere virtue of name.

    With no resistance
    And with no fear,
    Released, swirling into
    The vast atmosphere,
    The grand stream unbroken,
    Ever-shifting form,
    Whispers with white smoke
    While it's keeping me warm,

    Its essence soft-spoken
    Through fiery storm.
    Last edited by Erothyme; 04-18-2009, 11:23 PM.


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  • Dorby
    fake plastic deez
    • Aug 2007
    • 874

    #2
    Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

    ok so you lit a brush on fire
    Originally posted by Phynx
    And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.

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    • Erothyme
      FFR Player
      • Jan 2008
      • 2033

      #3
      Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

      I would hope someone with a psilocybe mushroom avatar would be more thoughtful.

      Apparently there are exceptions.


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      • Dr Tran
        Banned
        • Aug 2008
        • 1134

        #4
        Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

        i enjoyed reading it

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        • Erothyme
          FFR Player
          • Jan 2008
          • 2033

          #5
          Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

          Good to hear.


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          • NFD
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2007
            • 4715

            #6
            Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

            At least you didn't plagiarize.

            Reminded me of Robert Frost.

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            • Tokzic
              FFR Player
              • May 2005
              • 6878

              #7
              Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

              Originally posted by Dorby
              ok so you lit a brush on fire
              Brush can also mean wood, dumbass.

              Also, ****ing brilliant as always.

              Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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              • Dorby
                fake plastic deez
                • Aug 2007
                • 874

                #8
                Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                Originally posted by Tokzic
                Brush can also mean wood, dumbass.
                ok... you can still light wood on fire ...
                Originally posted by Phynx
                And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.

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                • Erothyme
                  FFR Player
                  • Jan 2008
                  • 2033

                  #9
                  Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                  I hope to god you're drunk or something.


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                  • Dorby
                    fake plastic deez
                    • Aug 2007
                    • 874

                    #10
                    Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                    How did you know that when I get drunk I log into FFR and read random poems in the forum?
                    Originally posted by Phynx
                    And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.

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                    • Erothyme
                      FFR Player
                      • Jan 2008
                      • 2033

                      #11
                      Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                      I've got a pretty well-developed intuition.


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                      • Dorby
                        fake plastic deez
                        • Aug 2007
                        • 874

                        #12
                        Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                        Obviously not. Oh yeah and your sig looks like ****.
                        Originally posted by Phynx
                        And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.

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                        • NFD
                          FFR Player
                          • Nov 2007
                          • 4715

                          #13
                          Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                          Your sig makes you a hypocrite, so blegh.

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                          • Erothyme
                            FFR Player
                            • Jan 2008
                            • 2033

                            #14
                            Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                            I don't see the resemblance between my signature and four asterisks, but I will take your word for it, as you are obviously incredibly wise.


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                            • Triplex72
                              CUSTOMIZED
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Oct 2005
                              • 975

                              #15
                              Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

                              tl;dr
                              connect 216.246.109.6:27015

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