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  • Chromer
    Hookers and Blow
    • Jul 2003
    • 4981

    #1

    Kingdom Hearts FanFic

    Ok For Those of you who have heard me in the FFR Chat, for the last week I have been telling people about my Kingdom Hearts FanFic called Light and Darkness. This story continues after the ending of the first game and spans over two halves and ten chapters. Ok Enough talking this is an excerpt from the first chapter "Remeniscence":

    "Sora, don't ever change."

    "What Kairi?"

    "Once we go and set sail, it'll be great."

    The warm face of Kairi faded into darkness. Sora woke up panting hard and sat up from the ground. He looked into the dark and found his weapon, Oblivion.

    "Firaga!"

    The flame hit a pile of sticks and filled the tent with light. It had been a year since Sora first started his journey to destroy Ansem and the Heartless and save the hearts of Kairi and Riku, as well as his own/

    Riku you fool, thought Sora, you just wanted to go and see what was out there. And Kairi. When will I ever see her again?

    Sora grew angry at this thought and looked at the keyblade for a minute. He made his decision and carried it out.

    "Strike Raid!,"he cried as he threw the keyblade into a nearby field.

    "All you ever done was cause me pain and misery!" yelled Sora at the weapon. "Ever since I became the keyblade master Im always put in the choice to save myself and my friends or worlds."

    Sora dropped to his knees an began to cry.

    " I just miss all my friends and I wish I could find happiness"

    "But True Happiness is not gained through personal triumphs and self-satisfaction. As the keyblade master you should continue to fight for the hearts of those you love, like me," said a girlish voice behind him.

    Sora recognized the vioce and asked, "Kairi?"

    So what will happen after this? Youll have to respond to this and tell me what you think. You can love it or hate it but I put alot of time and researched and played the game over 5 times to get the dialogue and details right. So uhhh thats it. Bye
  • Anticrombie0909
    FFR Player
    • Jul 2003
    • 4683

    #2
    If you liked Kingdom Hearts enough to write a fanfic over it, you'll probably hate me for saying this, but Kingdom Hearts is the lamest and most...hell, I'll say it, kiddy game I've ever seen. Bit hard to look tough when a dude with overlage shoes wielding a giant key is being backed up by Disney characters.

    Also, for disturbing and homoerotic Harry Potter fanfiction, please click here:
    http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1470482

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    • Feuergeist
      FFR Player
      • Aug 2003
      • 869

      #3
      WTF GROSS



      Wer noch nie einen Fehler gemacht hat, hat sich noch nie an etwas Neuem versucht.
      Albert Einstein (1879 - 1955)

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      • Chromer
        Hookers and Blow
        • Jul 2003
        • 4981

        #4
        Like I said You either Love it or Hate it. It doesnt matter to me Im still going to finish this online though. Yeah his shoes are a little big though. lol

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        • Arch0wl
          Banned
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Dec 2002
          • 6344

          #5
          Originally posted by Anticrombie0909
          hell, I'll say it, kiddy game I've ever seen.
          Please stop playing games.

          Thanks.

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          • Moogy
            嗚呼
            FFR Simfile Author
            • Aug 2003
            • 10303

            #6
            NO
            Plz visit my blog

            ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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            • eHarry
              FFR Player
              • Mar 2004
              • 22

              #7
              You can't judge a game like that..... it may look "kiddy" but in quality wise it is a great game. People say things like this all the time about games, such as Pop 'n music, without realising what the game is actually like, not how it looks.

              *paz|和平|paix|السّلام|frieden|강화|pace|平和|peace|םולש|*

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              • ananana
                FFR Player
                • Aug 2003
                • 632

                #8
                Kingdom Hearts was awesome!

                Chromer, it sounds good!

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                • Moogy
                  嗚呼
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Aug 2003
                  • 10303

                  #9
                  Kingdom Hearts was an awesome game, but fanfiction of any form is unbelievably lame.
                  Plz visit my blog

                  ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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                  • Anticrombie0909
                    FFR Player
                    • Jul 2003
                    • 4683

                    #10
                    Hello, discrimination! I figured I'd get a lot of venom for posting that, but it's true. The game had a chance to be somewhat enjoyable, if they didn't have to inject disney into every nuance of it. I never liked Disney movies past the age of 7 anyway, so why would I want to play a game about one? There is nothing fun about fighting with Daffy. There is nothing exciting about collecting puppies. If I wanted to do that, I'd go volunteer at Kid's Club.

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                    • Moogy
                      嗚呼
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Aug 2003
                      • 10303

                      #11
                      Daffy is from Loony Tunes, dipshit.
                      Plz visit my blog

                      ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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                      • Arch0wl
                        Banned
                        FFR Simfile Author
                        • Dec 2002
                        • 6344

                        #12
                        Originally posted by Anticrombie0909
                        if they didn't have to inject disney into every nuance of it. I never liked Disney movies past the age of 7 anyway, so why would I want to play a game about one? There is nothing fun about fighting with Daffy. There is nothing exciting about collecting puppies. If I wanted to do that, I'd go volunteer at Kid's Club.
                        Get the fuck over yourself. Games being "kiddy" or not doesn't matter. Dumbfucks started complaining about this recently after fucking GTA3, and the next gen consoles were releases.

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                        • Feuergeist
                          FFR Player
                          • Aug 2003
                          • 869

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Moogy
                          Daffy is from Loony Tunes, dipshit.
                          hahaha owned



                          Wer noch nie einen Fehler gemacht hat, hat sich noch nie an etwas Neuem versucht.
                          Albert Einstein (1879 - 1955)

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                          • VxDx
                            FFR Player
                            • May 2003
                            • 1871

                            #14
                            You forgot the part where arch is a bisexual.

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                            • Lupin_the_3rd
                              FFR Player
                              • Oct 2003
                              • 2665

                              #15
                              I'm sorry, but I'm with Anticrombie on this one. Oh no! look out or i will smite thee with a key!!

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