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  • Seefu Sefirosu
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2007
    • 314

    #1

    About to send Blind Guardian an email...

    Wanted a staffer or experienced member to proof it and make sure there were no problems with it:

    EDIT: Revised email.

    EDIT2: Revised again, my real name edited out for purposes of it being here. It is fully contained in the actual email.

    EDIT3: Rawr. I'm having some problems today... :S

    Good day.

    My name is **** ***** (username Seefu Sefirosu).I am emailing you in regards to "stepping" one or more of Blind Guardian's songs to be used in a game called Flash Flash Revolution.

    Flash Flash Revolution (FFR) is a take-off upon early versions of Dance Dance Revolution (DDR), i.e., DDR for your fingers. DDR is a rhythm based game where you hit arrows in time with the music using your feet. FFR is a variant of that where you use your keyboard arrows to hit arrows in time with the music. "Stepping" is when arrows are synced up with a song, so as to be played in FFR or DDR (FFR in this case).

    I was considering stepping part or all of "And Then There Was Silence". However, I acknowledge that I need the band's permission to use the song first. As you probably well know, there are three types of permission I can obtain from you, if you give any at all.

    A) Permission on a per-song basis. You must be contacted with each song to be stepped.

    B) Permission on an album basis. You give us (the FFR userbase) permission to step songs from one album, to be specified by you.

    C) Blanket Permissions. Any song released by you can be stepped at the will of whoever is stepping it, without contacting you.

    These permissions can be revoked at any time by you (the band and/or representatives thereof) if they happen to be given in the first place.

    If, in the above parts of this email, I have told you anything you already know, know that it's probably just to make sure everything is understood.

    Also, know that this earns FFR NO MONEY. At all. In any way. The songs are not being sold and the songs cannot be downloaded or redistributed. FFR is a free-to-play website.

    Thus, I am making a formal request, on the behalf of the FFR userbase, to obtain blanket permissions to step your songs. However, ANY permission given will be GREATLY appreciated.

    Thank you for your time.

    www.flashflashrevolution.com
    Last edited by Seefu Sefirosu; 06-20-2008, 12:50 PM.
  • TheRapingDragon
    A car crash mind
    • Aug 2005
    • 9788

    #2
    Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

    Give a link to the site.

    Also explain what FFR and DDR is. As in:

    "DDR is a rhythm based game where you hit arrows in time with the music using your feet. FFR is a variant of that where you use your keyboard arrows to hit arrows in time with the music".

    Take out "For your information (since you might not know" and just explain what stepping is from "stepping". "For your information" can come across as rude sometimes.

    EDIT: Also explain that this does not earn FFR money in any way. The songs are not being sold and the songs cannot be download or redistributed. FFR is a free-to-play website.

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    • Seefu Sefirosu
      FFR Player
      • Sep 2007
      • 314

      #3
      Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

      Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
      Give a link to the site.

      Also explain what FFR and DDR is. As in:

      "DDR is a rhythm based game where you hit arrows in time with the music using your feet. FFR is a variant of that where you use your keyboard arrows to hit arrows in time with the music".

      Take out "For your information (since you might not know" and just explain what stepping is from "stepping". "For your information" can come across as rude sometimes.
      Will do. I like that idea.

      EDIT: And that money part, I'll mention that too.

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      • TheRapingDragon
        A car crash mind
        • Aug 2005
        • 9788

        #4
        Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

        I edited in a little more. In case you miss it.

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        • Seefu Sefirosu
          FFR Player
          • Sep 2007
          • 314

          #5
          Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

          Revised email with your ideas added in.

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          • arrekusuof93
            FFR Player
            • Feb 2007
            • 1163

            #6
            Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

            Originally posted by Seefu Sefirosu
            B) Permission on an album basis. You will give us (the FFR userbase) permission to step songs from one album, to be specified by you.
            You might want to omit the word "will" in that statement. It sounds less demanding.

            Also, you might want to change all instances of your username to your real name. It's more formal, professional, etc. If you do this, however, it would still be a good idea to include what your username is and a link to your profile.

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            • Seefu Sefirosu
              FFR Player
              • Sep 2007
              • 314

              #7
              Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

              Originally posted by arrekusuof93
              You might want to omit the word "will" in that statement. It sounds less demanding.

              Also, you might want to change all instances of your username to your real name. It's more formal, professional, etc. If you do this, however, it would still be a good idea to include what your username is and a link to your profile.
              Good idea. Editing.

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              • TheRapingDragon
                A car crash mind
                • Aug 2005
                • 9788

                #8
                Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                There's no real need to give a link to his profile, I agree on the use of a real name as well as providing your username but not a link. Only link needed would be to the site itself.

                As in,

                Yours faithfully,

                (Name)

                Or, at the start of the letter:

                "Good day,

                I am (name) and I am writing to you today concerning (etc etc). At FFR my username is (name)."

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                • Seefu Sefirosu
                  FFR Player
                  • Sep 2007
                  • 314

                  #9
                  Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                  EDIT: Screwed it up.

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                  • TheRapingDragon
                    A car crash mind
                    • Aug 2005
                    • 9788

                    #10
                    Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                    "Thus, this is a formal request by **** ***** (username Seefu Sefirosu), on the behalf of the FFR userbase, to obtain blanket permissions to step your songs. However, ANY permission given will be GREATLY appreciated."

                    Should just be:

                    "Thus, this is a formal request by myself, on behalf of the FFR userbase, to obtain blanket permissions to step your songs. However, ANY permission given will be GREATLY appreciated.

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                    • Seefu Sefirosu
                      FFR Player
                      • Sep 2007
                      • 314

                      #11
                      Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                      Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
                      "Thus, this is a formal request by **** ***** (username Seefu Sefirosu), on the behalf of the FFR userbase, to obtain blanket permissions to step your songs. However, ANY permission given will be GREATLY appreciated."

                      Should just be:

                      "Thus, this is a formal request by myself, on behalf of the FFR userbase, to obtain blanket permissions to step your songs. However, ANY permission given will be GREATLY appreciated.
                      Myself can't be used. Not only does it not flow, it's grammatically incorrect, afaik.

                      However, I agree that it's a bit wordy. Revising.

                      Changed it. Look again, see if you like it.

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                      • devonin
                        Very Grave Indeed
                        Event Staff
                        FFR Simfile Author
                        • Apr 2004
                        • 10120

                        #12
                        Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                        Good luck getting permission from Virgin Records, since permission has to come from the label, and not the band, when you have a sufficiently famous band with a sufficiently large label.

                        Though I guess if any metal band was going to finagle keeping the rights to their own music it might be one like Blind Guardian.

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                        • Seefu Sefirosu
                          FFR Player
                          • Sep 2007
                          • 314

                          #13
                          Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                          Originally posted by devonin
                          Good luck getting permission from Virgin Records, since permission has to come from the label, and not the band.
                          Seriously?

                          Dude...

                          That's horrid.

                          EDIT: xD at you, dev. I'll see if I can get BG to give it to me. If they don't have the rights, I could be screwed.

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                          • arrekusuof93
                            FFR Player
                            • Feb 2007
                            • 1163

                            #14
                            Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                            Have we had trouble with Virgin Entertainment in the past?

                            EDIT: It only makes sense that we would have to get permission from the label, Seefu.

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                            • Seefu Sefirosu
                              FFR Player
                              • Sep 2007
                              • 314

                              #15
                              Re: About to send Blind Guardian an email...

                              Originally posted by arrekusuof93
                              Have we had trouble with Virgin Entertainment in the past?
                              More like, "We Virgin. We big company. Want profit."

                              Not that this is all in all a bad thing, but it is for us if they decide to want to charge or something out there like that.

                              EDIT: True... I guess. Though it's horrible to give up the rights to your music. Eh. I don't know much about the industry, I've never done this before.

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