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  • l Endorphin l
    Maybe
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Jan 2007
    • 574
    #1

    Song I'm working on.

    Hey guys...
    Working on another song, really taking my time with it.

    And I am trying to find out where in my song creation things go wrong...so in order to do that.
    I am going to post the song at each stage of development.
    And let you guys tell me whats wrong, and what is right.

    Here is the first minute and sixteen seconds of the song.
    I used reason, a chopped Amen, a chopped Vinyl, a pad that sounded better as a poly synth, and nubbinz friend beatboxing with the delay at 0.
    Also a DnB Wet bass.


    No mastering is done, except for the amen was a little too loud so it was turned down about 2 notches.

    Looking forward to your guy's opinions and knowledge.

    Ego Boost(Demo)
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    • Frozen Beat
      coLSBMidday, zerg sc2 pro
      • Nov 2007
      • 1092
      #2
      Re: Song I'm working on.

      uh...mind telling us what song you're doing lol?

      Feel several different pains, before they're colored pure red
      Make a little chance! Start connecting us into to tomorrow, ready and go!
      No matter how many times I keep going down, in these unending rounds
      I'm gonna keep up! We can create hope, it's our story!

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        • EnR
          Massive flaming dildos.
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Jul 2007
          • 8431
          #3
          Re: Song I'm working on.

          Originally posted by Frozen Beat
          uh...mind telling us what song you're doing lol?
          Ego Boost(Demo)

          ....
          sigpic

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            • robertsona
              missa in h-moll
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Dec 2006
              • 3997
              #4
              Re: Song I'm working on.

              Originally posted by Frozen Beat
              uh...mind telling us what song you're doing lol?
              what a win post

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                • Frozen Beat
                  coLSBMidday, zerg sc2 pro
                  • Nov 2007
                  • 1092
                  #5
                  Re: Song I'm working on.

                  What does that mean? Robert?

                  Feel several different pains, before they're colored pure red
                  Make a little chance! Start connecting us into to tomorrow, ready and go!
                  No matter how many times I keep going down, in these unending rounds
                  I'm gonna keep up! We can create hope, it's our story!

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                    • jakeyjake7
                      FFR Player
                      • Jul 2006
                      • 343
                      #6
                      Re: Song I'm working on.

                      it means you should have read the first post a little more carefuly. and i really like the song. at the beginning, i wasn't sure that that Amen fit in there, but then it really sounded great.
                      Originally posted by tuv
                      I enjoy eating my beard

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                        • l Endorphin l
                          Maybe
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Jan 2007
                          • 574
                          #7
                          Re: Song I'm working on.

                          Ok.


                          Song is finished.

                          No mastering though.

                          Ego boost

                          I GOT ZEROBOMBED WOOT WOOT
                          Last edited by l Endorphin l; 04-4-2008, 05:59 PM.

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                            • robertsona
                              missa in h-moll
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Dec 2006
                              • 3997
                              #8
                              Re: Song I'm working on.

                              zerobomb is why newgrounds is awesome

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                                • customstuff
                                  ♥C.S. + A.M.♥
                                  • Nov 2006
                                  • 4892
                                  #9
                                  Re: Song I'm working on.

                                  Wow. That sounds f'ing awesome! Why can't I do that? lol. We have your permission for FFR right?
                                  Last edited by customstuff; 04-4-2008, 06:13 PM.

                                  Originally posted by MrMagic5239
                                  Placements are final, custom will not be moved to D6, just because he is good at jacks, and mediocre at just about every other FMO in the game.
                                  Originally posted by customstuff
                                  Originally posted by MrMagic5239
                                  welcome to D6

                                  start playing

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                                    • l Endorphin l
                                      Maybe
                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                      • Jan 2007
                                      • 574
                                      #10
                                      Re: Song I'm working on.

                                      Yup...You do.

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                                        • iPatcH
                                          Swamp Lemons Rule
                                          FFR Simfile Author
                                          FFR Music Producer
                                          • Dec 2004
                                          • 3370
                                          #11
                                          Re: Song I'm working on.

                                          Just repeating what I told you in aim. Nice breaks, lazy melody. Not too bad. :P
                                          put on a donk on it

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                                            • Doctor_Attitude
                                              FFR Player
                                              • Feb 2008
                                              • 47
                                              #12
                                              Re: Song I'm working on.

                                              Reviewed it on NG.

                                              Top notch if it was a full length tune
                                              Nice dynamics. Agreed with iPatch though, a bit of a lazy melody, you could do more with it.

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                                                • l Endorphin l
                                                  Maybe
                                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                                  • Jan 2007
                                                  • 574
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Song I'm working on.

                                                  I redid a few things...few new instruments...couple of EQ stuff...and a brand new crazy ass ending.

                                                  Let me know how it is...and how the string patches are

                                                  Ego Boost(Remastered)

                                                  And no annoying ear bleeding pad...ala KGZ complaining.

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                                                    • robertsona
                                                      missa in h-moll
                                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                                      • Dec 2006
                                                      • 3997
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Song I'm working on.

                                                      much better, nice.

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                                                        • iPatcH
                                                          Swamp Lemons Rule
                                                          FFR Simfile Author
                                                          FFR Music Producer
                                                          • Dec 2004
                                                          • 3370
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Song I'm working on.

                                                          Still have pretty much the same complaints... while you added more, you still lack in a defined melody, I dunno, especially when it breaks down, you could really get something going there, any sort of solo. As for the glitch stuff, I do enjoy it, it was a nice touch, although I think the ending part of it was a tad too abrupt.

                                                          Overall, great production value.
                                                          put on a donk on it

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