What is love? - Flash Flash Revolution

X

Emo_Saur_

FFR Veteran

Join Date: Feb 2007

Posts: 2952
Share

Post
#1

What is love?

12-7-2007, 06:51 PM

Whats Love?

Is it when you sit up at night restless cant get to sleep only wishing to be with one person right now sitting under the stars ALL alone with no distractions?

When you want to hold there hand every waking moment?

You want to be with them all u can possibly be?

When they are all you can think about?

When they are the only person that can make you happy when your sad?

When you get that feeling when your around them that your completely free of all drama?

When you around them or talking to them they make you feel that there is noone around them because they are the ONLY person you want to focus on?

When sex is not the only thing you worry about?

When you dont judge them for what they do or what they look like?

No matter how bad ther morning breath is you still awaken them to a big kiss?

yeah its kinda cheesy..
what do you guys think?
leave unwanted comment in your head please

Last edited by Emo_Saur_; 12-8-2007, 08:46 AM. Reason: Oh tha complaints keep rolling in

sigpic
Tags: None
Verruckter

FFR Player

Join Date: Apr 2004

Posts: 2707
Share

Post
#2

12-7-2007, 07:06 PM

Re: What is love?

Baby don't hurt me.

If you want to be taken seriously, though, I suggest you correct the horrible spelling mistakes (even if you did them on "internet lingo" purpose).

Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
Image removed for size violation.
Comment
pntballa18

FFR Player

Join Date: Mar 2005

Posts: 3357
Share

Post
#3

12-7-2007, 08:46 PM

Re: What is love?

Originally posted by Verruckter

Baby don't hurt me.

crap i was beaten to it
Comment
arrekusuof93

FFR Player

Join Date: Feb 2007

Posts: 1163
Share

Post
#4

12-7-2007, 08:49 PM

Re: What is love?

Originally posted by pntballa18

crap i was beaten to it

As was I.

Yes, fix the spelling mistakes and it would be quite nice.
Comment
LLaMaSaUceYup

FFR Player

Join Date: Jan 2007

Posts: 3759
Share

Post
#5

12-7-2007, 08:50 PM

Re: What is love?

I would actually read it if there were no mistakes.
Comment
phe0nixblade

Praise the sun mofo

Join Date: Sep 2005

Posts: 4281
Share

Post
#6

12-7-2007, 08:52 PM

Re: What is love?

lol

When u get that feeling when your around them that ur completely free of all drama?

So you make a emo poem about it?
Comment
Tokzic

FFR Player

Join Date: May 2005

Posts: 6878
Share

Post
#7

12-8-2007, 12:13 AM

Re: What is love?

It sounds like an e-mail forward.

Also, absolutely all of it is overplayed and meaningless crap.

~very popular guitar streamer~

Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what
Comment
XpTrIpPyNeSsXd

EHHS Sucks!

Join Date: Mar 2005

Posts: 419
Share

Post
#8

12-8-2007, 01:18 AM

Re: What is love?

This touched me on a personal level. Thank you for this.

Nah, just kidding, kill yourself.

Originally posted by XXXsmittyXXX

WEEDWEEDWEED<3333
Comment
Emo_Saur_

FFR Veteran

Join Date: Feb 2007

Posts: 2952
Share

Post
#9

12-8-2007, 08:43 AM

Re: What is love?

Wth is all tha bashing about
DAYUM! and um if u can read
Read tha last thing i fxcking wrote

sigpic
Comment
phe0nixblade

Praise the sun mofo

Join Date: Sep 2005

Posts: 4281
Share

Post
#10

12-8-2007, 03:40 PM

Re: What is love?

Originally posted by Emo_Saur_

whine
complain
leave unwanted comments in this thread please

Yeah what about it?
Comment
Verruckter

FFR Player

Join Date: Apr 2004

Posts: 2707
Share

Post
#11

12-8-2007, 03:54 PM

Re: What is love?

Originally posted by Emo_Saur_

Wth is all tha bashing about
DAYUM! and um if u can read
Read tha last thing i fxcking wrote

boo hoo poor kid can't take criticism.

Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
Image removed for size violation.
Comment
Tokzic

FFR Player

Join Date: May 2005

Posts: 6878
Share

Post
#12

12-8-2007, 11:35 PM

Re: What is love?

Reality check for OP: If you post a thread about one of your works, all discussion is valid, and you're not in a position to say "ONLY POSITIVE COMMENTS PLEASE". If you do this, you demonstrate that you don't care about improving, and furthermore that the only reason you write is to have people suck you off.

~very popular guitar streamer~

Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what
Comment
SnS

FFR Veteran

Join Date: Jun 2007

Posts: 680
Share

Post
#13

12-8-2007, 11:40 PM

Re: What is love?

Originally posted by Verruckter

Baby don't hurt me.

Ah I wanted to say that.
Comment
imajrockette

FFR Player

Join Date: Apr 2007

Posts: 36
Share

Post
#14

12-9-2007, 07:19 PM

Re: What is love?

you guys are abunch of a-holes.jeez.how is this an "emo" poem.its not even a ark poem and stop using the word "emo" becuase half of you idiots dont even know what it is.

aniway emo_saur well see....you do have to take critism.at first i used to cuss out a-holesl ike half the guys that commented on your poem but later i leanred it was best to take thier critsm to help me improve and sicne i did take it.i actually did improve some in my poetry.

i encourage critim now and if someone makes a ignorant comment than i just ignore it and skip on to the help ful parts of someone elses comments.

your poem is kind of good.i can realte some but i end up being put through lots of pain becuase of love so yeah im not fond of poems like this but it still kind of good.

i wish you luck with your poetry ^^

▄▀ ♥◘ ▄▀ ♥◘ music is love▄▀ ♥◘
Comment
mead1

Cerebellumberjack

FFR Simfile Author

Join Date: Aug 2003

Posts: 3960
Share

Post
#15

12-9-2007, 08:30 PM

Re: What is love?

Originally posted by imajrockette

words

learn to type

learn to not tell people they don't know what "emo" is

learn to not call people ignorant and demonstrate your inability to use the space bar properly in the same post

learn2play
Comment

Previous 1 2 template Next

Working...