What is love?
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Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
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I'm surprised you got a cogent thought out there when all you're doing is bashing your head against the keyboard.you guys are abunch of a-holes.jeez.how is this an "emo" poem.its not even a ark poem and stop using the word "emo" becuase half of you idiots dont even know what it is.
aniway emo_saur well see....you do have to take critism.at first i used to cuss out a-holesl ike half the guys that commented on your poem but later i leanred it was best to take thier critsm to help me improve and sicne i did take it.i actually did improve some in my poetry.
i encourage critim now and if someone makes a ignorant comment than i just ignore it and skip on to the help ful parts of someone elses comments.
your poem is kind of good.i can realte some but i end up being put through lots of pain becuase of love so yeah im not fond of poems like this but it still kind of good.
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Repost or send this to five people and the love of your life will call you tomorrow.Comment
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