Love, a fantastical experience..

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  • hayatewillown
    FFR Veteran
    • Dec 2005
    • 413
    #1

    Love, a fantastical experience..

    [ This is mostly to the girl that I care for and love and would do anything in the world for her ]

    I stand and watch and take a deep breath. After taking a large amount of hidden courage, I began to speak to the one who's heart I most desire. You make my heart beat faster than ever, making the thrill of being around you much more pleasant, you make me happy. We have been through a lot together, and I can only imagine that after a long period of time, we had such evil attempts of breaking apart further, it could end so suddenly . Your independence has driven me mad and by both of us seeing the error of our ways has only begun to strengthen the bond between us. I sit at night wondering how I can make it to the next day without seeing your beautiful face one more time. We both have had crazy dreams and fantastical experiences about and with each other. I could not love you more than I can right now but yet I feel that I'm not giving it all. I love you, and I want you to know this.

    Is this Love, or is this fantasy?
    Last edited by hayatewillown; 10-11-2007, 05:18 PM.
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    • ShastaTwist
      FFR Veteran
      • Sep 2004
      • 599
      #2
      Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

      I am of the opinion that love letters shouldn't be posted on forums. No matter.

      I feel like this is really sort of cheesy and that if you ever break up with this girl and find another, you'll probably write pretty much the same things. Call me bitter, I don't know. There are some spelling mistakes (i.e. who's instead of whose) and one part doesn't make sense (it could it so suddenly).

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        • hayatewillown
          FFR Veteran
          • Dec 2005
          • 413
          #3
          Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

          Nah, and there can be opinions on love letters.
          Believe me, if we do break up theres going to be an incredibly strong chance of us getting back together the next day.

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            • phe0nixblade
              Praise the sun mofo
              • Sep 2005
              • 4281
              #4
              Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

              It sucks.

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                • ShastaTwist
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Sep 2004
                  • 599
                  #5
                  Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                  Okay, well...

                  I don't know how old you are, but it all seems very romanticized.

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                    • Verruckter
                      FFR Player
                      • Apr 2004
                      • 2707
                      #6
                      Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                      It doesn't say anything.. I'm not even sure what it is... Is it a poem? A short story? Or just a random text?

                      Something is missing there.
                      Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                      Image removed for size violation.

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                        • hayatewillown
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Dec 2005
                          • 413
                          #7
                          Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                          It's more of a love letter, to be exact.

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                            • xObserveRx
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Aug 2003
                              • 1148
                              #8
                              Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                              I don't really see how this is impersonal. I mean yeah, it looks generic to someone who isn't really involved with either of these two people, but for the most part, someone who is reading those who understands a lot of the vague, yet obvious experiences described here, most likely would find it very personal; touching even.

                              Either way, I still agree that this would've been a much better PM than thread. Also, I hope your girlfriend or whatever she is to you now, loves your bad usage of tenses. That aside, good luck.
                              Come Play The Werewolf Game!

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                                • All_That_Chaz
                                  Supreme Dictator For Life
                                  • Apr 2004
                                  • 5874
                                  #9
                                  Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                  sappy, sounds fabricated. i spout garbage like this to most people to get laughs.

                                  hey shasta, you must believe me when i say that i am deeply, desperately, and emphatically in love with you. truly the stars had been aligned when you descended from the heavens to grace us with your unparalleled beauty. i love you with the fire of a thousand suns. i know where my heart and my loyalties lie. i will smile at the broken seventh seal as apocalypse overtakes me; for i am sustained by my love for you, my fair, sweet Shasta.

                                  see? easy. hardly any thought involved at all. hallmark caliber bilge with a little creepy overdramaticized romanticism. (except i totally mean it shasta, 374 days until you're 18 right? lol)

                                  drunk chaz is not nice. i apologize.
                                  Back to "Back to Earth"
                                  Originally posted by FoJaR
                                  dammit chaz
                                  Originally posted by FoJaR
                                  god dammit chaz
                                  Originally posted by MalReynolds
                                  I bet when you live in a glass house, the temptation to throw stones is magnified strictly because you're not supposed to.

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                                    • xObserveRx
                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                      • Aug 2003
                                      • 1148
                                      #10
                                      Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                      nah, I totally get what you're saying. I will admit, I'm pretty sappy and what not with my gf, but still, to her, it's personal, as she "gets" a lot of the stuff I say, or whatever. But yeah, the majority of people would agree with you.

                                      On the whole though, actions speak louder than words, so yeah, use that to express your feelings, not words like this.
                                      Come Play The Werewolf Game!

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                                        • summerhill
                                          FFR Player
                                          • Feb 2007
                                          • 38
                                          #11
                                          Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                          maybe this letter was meant for you, shastatwist, and he was trying to get your attention......oh the irony, oh the pain, oh the humilitation..

                                          but heyatewillown, as long as you write, no matter what it is, thats cool....it takes lot of guts to post something personal for everyone to see

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                                            • Verruckter
                                              FFR Player
                                              • Apr 2004
                                              • 2707
                                              #12
                                              Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                              Originally posted by summerhill
                                              maybe this letter was meant for you, shastatwist, and he was trying to get your attention......oh the irony, oh the pain, oh the humilitation..

                                              but heyatewillown, as long as you write, no matter what it is, thats cool....it takes lot of guts to post something personal for everyone to see
                                              There's no such thing as guts on the internets.
                                              Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                                              Image removed for size violation.

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                                                • summerhill
                                                  FFR Player
                                                  • Feb 2007
                                                  • 38
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                                  but there is certainly a display of guts online......see above (his letter)....there's guts right there...putting your emotion into something that people will criticize to feel cool or better or just for the sake of argument.....

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                                                    • rade0110
                                                      FFR Player
                                                      • Dec 2004
                                                      • 1253
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                                      Originally posted by summerhill
                                                      but there is certainly a display of guts online......see above (his letter)....there's guts right there...putting your emotion into something that people will criticize to feel cool or better or just for the sake of argument.....
                                                      If you're scared of people's opinions on the internet, you shouldn't be here.

                                                      Also chaz, you forgot the whole "You're why cavemen painted on walls." bit.
                                                      Last edited by rade0110; 10-12-2007, 08:24 AM.
                                                      Originally posted by Synthlight
                                                      Everyone uses quotes from Synthlight in their signature. So I'm making this one up to fit in.

                                                      Cheers,

                                                      Synthlight

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                                                        • All_That_Chaz
                                                          Supreme Dictator For Life
                                                          • Apr 2004
                                                          • 5874
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Love, a fantastical experience..

                                                          Originally posted by rade0110
                                                          Also chaz, you forgot the whole "Your why cavemen painted on walls." bit.
                                                          eh that stopped being funny once family guy did it. i try to keep a little bit of originality in my shameless romanticism.
                                                          Back to "Back to Earth"
                                                          Originally posted by FoJaR
                                                          dammit chaz
                                                          Originally posted by FoJaR
                                                          god dammit chaz
                                                          Originally posted by MalReynolds
                                                          I bet when you live in a glass house, the temptation to throw stones is magnified strictly because you're not supposed to.

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