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  • Flyleef
    FFR Player
    • May 2007
    • 401
    #1

    My poem*

    Suicide

    This light that holds us is not what it seems
    Our only feelings are darkness covered
    in serene thoughts of youth and guilt
    It's our only fate that chooses to grow
    or shrink, life is endangering to those who of us
    think. Our mentality is different than the
    roots of our trees. Dreams need water
    in order to breathe. Life makes our
    wonderment take a leap into time, without
    speak. Pleasure kills the eyes of blurry mens
    feet. Make blood heal my soul, and others weep.
    For their destiny is not known to angels nor beasts.
    Flames burying hearing in hopes of becoming weak.
    Change our lives, and let us sleep.
    Last edited by Flyleef; 09-16-2007, 08:39 PM.
    No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
    these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
    If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
    My heart, filled with loving radiance
    Is forever thinking of you.

    These words that we play are a pleasant melody
    All I want is to have you by my side,
    so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
    even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.
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    • Tokzic
      FFR Player
      • May 2005
      • 6878
      #2
      Re: My poem

      Don't post things in two places.

      Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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        • ~HentaiXXX~
          Banned
          • Apr 2007
          • 2955
          #3
          Re: My poem*

          Horrible poem because all ending words had the long "e" sound.

          Oh wait, it wasn't just that, I'm afraid it might have been horrible anyways.

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            • Flyleef
              FFR Player
              • May 2007
              • 401
              #4
              Re: My poem

              Originally posted by Tokzic
              Don't post things in two places.
              It was an accident. Sorry

              Horrible poem because all ending words had the long "e" sound.

              Oh wait, it wasn't just that, I'm afraid it might have been horrible anyways.
              Sorry for making it rhyme.
              No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
              these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
              If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
              My heart, filled with loving radiance
              Is forever thinking of you.

              These words that we play are a pleasant melody
              All I want is to have you by my side,
              so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
              even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                • spinal_compression
                  FFR Player
                  • Oct 2005
                  • 3325
                  #5
                  Re: My poem*

                  Yea you made two threads...

                  Originally posted by Tasselfoot
                  oh. japanese song... lets put the american flag on that!

                  Originally posted by Tasselfoot
                  I do accept sexual favors as bribes.

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                    • ~HentaiXXX~
                      Banned
                      • Apr 2007
                      • 2955
                      #6
                      Re: My poem*

                      Well, poems don't all rhyme with the same sound, you can change it in the middle somewhere you know.

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                        • Flyleef
                          FFR Player
                          • May 2007
                          • 401
                          #7
                          Re: My poem*

                          Originally posted by ~HentaiXXX~
                          Well, poems don't all rhyme with the same sound, you can change it in the middle somewhere you know.
                          It was my first attempt at a poem. It's a suicide poem.
                          Last edited by Flyleef; 09-16-2007, 08:39 PM.
                          No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                          these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                          If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                          My heart, filled with loving radiance
                          Is forever thinking of you.

                          These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                          All I want is to have you by my side,
                          so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                          even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                            • Dimitri13
                              FFR Player
                              • Jun 2004
                              • 701
                              #8
                              Re: My poem*

                              ****in emo pansy-ass ****.


                              Originally posted by Tibs
                              Originally posted by arsonistsgetallthegirls
                              changing Antarctica into a desert
                              good thing theres lots of sand under all the ice

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                                • ShAiOnEi
                                  FFR Player
                                  • May 2007
                                  • 1110
                                  #9
                                  Re: My poem*

                                  Durr it's uh um it's about duh suicide like oh man that means it's totally a good poem I mean killing yourself is good right? Hurr Hurr
                                  I love my son Auron

                                  Epic thread killer

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                                    • Flyleef
                                      FFR Player
                                      • May 2007
                                      • 401
                                      #10
                                      Re: My poem*

                                      Originally posted by Dimitri13
                                      ****in emo pansy-ass ****.
                                      I'm not emo, lol.
                                      No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                                      these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                                      If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                                      My heart, filled with loving radiance
                                      Is forever thinking of you.

                                      These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                                      All I want is to have you by my side,
                                      so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                                      even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                                        • hayatewillown
                                          FFR Veteran
                                          • Dec 2005
                                          • 413
                                          #11
                                          Re: My poem*

                                          It's called freaking free verse and if the man/women wants to post a damn poem up here then either start freaking helping him/her improve it or gtfo!!!!

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                                            • Tokzic
                                              FFR Player
                                              • May 2005
                                              • 6878
                                              #12
                                              Re: My poem*

                                              What brainless gorilla moved this to Media (which I'd love to know how a poem fits into)?

                                              Why, in fact, didn't they just lock it for being a dupe?

                                              Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                                                • Squeek
                                                  let it snow~
                                                  • Jan 2004
                                                  • 14444
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: My poem*

                                                  I wish I knew.

                                                  Can't anyone use the Literature forum for anything other than emo poetry? Come on now. I regret voting to instate this forum.

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