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  • #1
    FFR Player
    Flyleef
    • May 2007
    • 401

    My poem*

    Suicide

    This light that holds us is not what it seems
    Our only feelings are darkness covered
    in serene thoughts of youth and guilt
    It's our only fate that chooses to grow
    or shrink, life is endangering to those who of us
    think. Our mentality is different than the
    roots of our trees. Dreams need water
    in order to breathe. Life makes our
    wonderment take a leap into time, without
    speak. Pleasure kills the eyes of blurry mens
    feet. Make blood heal my soul, and others weep.
    For their destiny is not known to angels nor beasts.
    Flames burying hearing in hopes of becoming weak.
    Change our lives, and let us sleep.
    Last edited by Flyleef; 09-16-2007, 09:39 PM.
    No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
    these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
    If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
    My heart, filled with loving radiance
    Is forever thinking of you.

    These words that we play are a pleasant melody
    All I want is to have you by my side,
    so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
    even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.
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    • #2
      FFR Player
      Tokzic
      • May 2005
      • 6879
      Re: My poem

      Don't post things in two places.

      Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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        • #3
          Banned
          ~HentaiXXX~
          • Apr 2007
          • 2955
          Re: My poem*

          Horrible poem because all ending words had the long "e" sound.

          Oh wait, it wasn't just that, I'm afraid it might have been horrible anyways.

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            • #4
              FFR Player
              Flyleef
              • May 2007
              • 401
              Re: My poem

              Originally posted by Tokzic
              Don't post things in two places.
              It was an accident. Sorry

              Horrible poem because all ending words had the long "e" sound.

              Oh wait, it wasn't just that, I'm afraid it might have been horrible anyways.
              Sorry for making it rhyme.
              No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
              these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
              If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
              My heart, filled with loving radiance
              Is forever thinking of you.

              These words that we play are a pleasant melody
              All I want is to have you by my side,
              so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
              even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                • #5
                  FFR Player
                  spinal_compression
                  • Oct 2005
                  • 3325
                  Re: My poem*

                  Yea you made two threads...

                  Originally posted by Tasselfoot
                  oh. japanese song... lets put the american flag on that!

                  Originally posted by Tasselfoot
                  I do accept sexual favors as bribes.

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                    • #6
                      Banned
                      ~HentaiXXX~
                      • Apr 2007
                      • 2955
                      Re: My poem*

                      Well, poems don't all rhyme with the same sound, you can change it in the middle somewhere you know.

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                        • #7
                          FFR Player
                          Flyleef
                          • May 2007
                          • 401
                          Re: My poem*

                          Originally posted by ~HentaiXXX~
                          Well, poems don't all rhyme with the same sound, you can change it in the middle somewhere you know.
                          It was my first attempt at a poem. It's a suicide poem.
                          Last edited by Flyleef; 09-16-2007, 09:39 PM.
                          No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                          these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                          If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                          My heart, filled with loving radiance
                          Is forever thinking of you.

                          These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                          All I want is to have you by my side,
                          so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                          even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                            • #8
                              FFR Player
                              Dimitri13
                              • Jun 2004
                              • 701
                              Re: My poem*

                              ****in emo pansy-ass ****.


                              Originally posted by Tibs
                              Originally posted by arsonistsgetallthegirls
                              changing Antarctica into a desert
                              good thing theres lots of sand under all the ice

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                                • #9
                                  FFR Player
                                  ShAiOnEi
                                  • May 2007
                                  • 1110
                                  Re: My poem*

                                  Durr it's uh um it's about duh suicide like oh man that means it's totally a good poem I mean killing yourself is good right? Hurr Hurr
                                  I love my son Auron

                                  Epic thread killer

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                                    • #10
                                      FFR Player
                                      Flyleef
                                      • May 2007
                                      • 401
                                      Re: My poem*

                                      Originally posted by Dimitri13
                                      ****in emo pansy-ass ****.
                                      I'm not emo, lol.
                                      No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                                      these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                                      If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                                      My heart, filled with loving radiance
                                      Is forever thinking of you.

                                      These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                                      All I want is to have you by my side,
                                      so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                                      even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                                        • #11
                                          FFR Veteran
                                          hayatewillown
                                          • Dec 2005
                                          • 413
                                          Re: My poem*

                                          It's called freaking free verse and if the man/women wants to post a damn poem up here then either start freaking helping him/her improve it or gtfo!!!!

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                                            • #12
                                              FFR Player
                                              Tokzic
                                              • May 2005
                                              • 6879
                                              Re: My poem*

                                              What brainless gorilla moved this to Media (which I'd love to know how a poem fits into)?

                                              Why, in fact, didn't they just lock it for being a dupe?

                                              Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                                                • #13
                                                  let it snow~
                                                  Squeek
                                                  • Jan 2004
                                                  • 14444
                                                  Re: My poem*

                                                  I wish I knew.

                                                  Can't anyone use the Literature forum for anything other than emo poetry? Come on now. I regret voting to instate this forum.

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