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  • Zaevod
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2013
    • 385

    #1

    New song

    I tried hard, I hope it's good.

    https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/elusive-truths
    https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse
  • rushyrulz
    Digital Dancing!
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Feb 2006
    • 12985

    #2
    Re: New song

    Nice. Reminiscent of Dimrain, without sounding like every Dimrain song ever. Might be even better if there was some synth layered in instead of just straight piano the entire time, but I really like the arpeggiation you used!

    Great job! (9/10)
    Last edited by rushyrulz; 10-9-2013, 02:38 PM.


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    • Zaevod
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2013
      • 385

      #3
      Re: New song

      Thanks. There were the strings, too, but I guess they were too subtle?
      https://soundcloud.com/zaevod/the-glimpse

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      • rushyrulz
        Digital Dancing!
        FFR Simfile Author
        FFR Music Producer
        • Feb 2006
        • 12985

        #4
        Re: New song

        The strings aren't too subtle, I was just remarking on the main melody being all piano.


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        • ScylaX
          urararararararara
          FFR Music Producer
          • Dec 2007
          • 1044

          #5
          Re: New song

          Tell me.
          How do you write your chords progressions ?
          Suimega is my present username!!! (b-but feel free to call me scylaax anyway) | https://suimega.bandcamp.com/

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          • StoneMcKnuckle
            FFR Player
            • May 2011
            • 790

            #6
            Re: New song

            hey, this is pretty good!

            the chord progression is still really crazy but after hearing this I'm not entirely sure that's a completely bad thing anymore. with time you'll learn how to iron out some of clunkier parts and then maybe you can create your "own" unique sound from that~

            edit: you know what though? it sounds like you have the piano hitting the super bright lead notes and the piano doign the crazy arpeggio thing on the same channel. separate those channels, and then apply some more reverb or something to the lead notes 'cause they disappear too quickly and it sounds a little odd sometimes

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