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  • DjMeas
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2011
    • 164

    #1

    Displaced (Work In Progress)

    DISPLACED (work in progress)
    https://soundcloud.com/measwork2/displacedv08

    Sorry for the absence! All these medications have been kicking my butt big time but I'm feeling well enough to get back into singing and recording more work for Undercover Apple's 2nd release.

    This one is called Displaced (Empty Room / Empty Face) and is honestly really about how I've been feeling the last 6 months. As you may or may not know, I've been diagnosed with an autoimmune disease which basically attacks my kidney like no tomorrow and there isn't a treatment for it, so basically it will lose its function until it can't filter anymore and I will need dialysis (or a transplant if I'm lucky, but that'll just be resetting the hourglass until it happens again).

    [Lyrics]
    Words fell out from our mouths
    Like they had so much weight
    Each syllable was so heavy
    All their meanings filled up the empty space

    The time has come
    For me to say sorry
    For what I've become

    An empty room
    An empty face
    A hollow boy
    At home when he's displaced

    Conversation in a pause
    There's something wrong with the reels
    As the film spins uncontrollably
    Each scene led up to how I feel

    The time has come
    For me to say sorry
    For what I've become

    An empty room
    An empty face
    A hollow boy
    At home when he's displaced


    In light of all this though, I have found about more about myself and sometimes being "displaced' is actually comforting and depressing at the same time.

    So far I have the 1st and 2nd verses recorded with the chorus (Emie will be singing along side me in the chorus as well) and the bridge isn't written yet so there's just some filler music for the last quarter of the song.

    Thanks for listening!
    Last edited by DjMeas; 06-25-2013, 10:49 PM.
    http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
    [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]
  • Ohaider
    FFR Veteran
    • Jun 2012
    • 2893

    #2
    Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

    Welcome back! Like the chune

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    • StoneMcKnuckle
      FFR Player
      • May 2011
      • 790

      #3
      Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

      Sounds like you have the same disease as my old man. Sucks to hear about that, and hope you get better.

      Song's great, but kinda lacks that cozy melancholic feel of your other UA songs that I love so much. Guessing it's not related to UA even though Emie's in it?

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      • DjMeas
        FFR Player
        • Sep 2011
        • 164

        #4
        Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

        Thanks for listening to the both of you!

        So far I have about 8 songs penned out, some more traditional UA style and some other more tapping into my singer/songwriter acoustic themed work. Going for more variety in the next release

        McK, what does your father have if you don't me asking?
        http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
        [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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        • mi40
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Aug 2008
          • 3655

          #5
          Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

          OMG NYESSSS DJMEAS

          i still have your One Thousand Cranes in progress for FFR

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          • StoneMcKnuckle
            FFR Player
            • May 2011
            • 790

            #6
            Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

            Originally posted by DjMeas
            McK, what does your father have if you don't me asking?
            Not sure, but his liver's gone to shit. He's got cirrhosis and whatnot, and apparently getting a transplant won't do him much good as it'll inevitably happen again later down the road. I don't think it's the same as what you have though - there seems to be a treatment for whatever it is he's got.

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            • DjMeas
              FFR Player
              • Sep 2011
              • 164

              #7
              Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

              Originally posted by mi40
              OMG NYESSSS DJMEAS

              i still have your One Thousand Cranes in progress for FFR
              LOL I thought everyone forgot about that one
              http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
              [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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              • DjMeas
                FFR Player
                • Sep 2011
                • 164

                #8
                Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)

                Originally posted by StoneMcKnuckle
                Not sure, but his liver's gone to shit. He's got cirrhosis and whatnot, and apparently getting a transplant won't do him much good as it'll inevitably happen again later down the road. I don't think it's the same as what you have though - there seems to be a treatment for whatever it is he's got.
                Ahhhh I see, yea mine is kidney related and since the autoimmune disease is part of my red blood cells, the transplant will only last so long before it goes bad

                Hope the best for your father!

                KgZ, thank you for listening!
                http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
                [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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