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  • Ohaider
    FFR Veteran
    • Jun 2012
    • 2893

    #1

    Dohraymefahsolateedoh

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/512922
    Last edited by Ohaider; 11-27-2012, 04:34 PM. Reason: Added intro
  • StoneMcKnuckle
    FFR Player
    • May 2011
    • 790

    #2
    Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

    sounds great so far, unexpectedly.

    what's this genre called?

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    • Ohaider
      FFR Veteran
      • Jun 2012
      • 2893

      #3
      Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

      Man i have no idea, subgenre of hip hop i suppose
      Inspiration came from Vanilla



      Oh and XXYYXX

      Last edited by Ohaider; 11-25-2012, 09:26 PM.

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      • Ohaider
        FFR Veteran
        • Jun 2012
        • 2893

        #4
        Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

        Updated, probably won't do much more with it haha

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        • StoneMcKnuckle
          FFR Player
          • May 2011
          • 790

          #5
          Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

          "file has never existed or has been deleted"

          it's a conspiracy

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          • Ohaider
            FFR Veteran
            • Jun 2012
            • 2893

            #6
            Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

            Originally posted by StoneMcKnuckle
            "file has never existed or has been deleted"

            it's a conspiracy
            fixedd

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            • anwar-inc
              FFR Player
              • Jul 2012
              • 166

              #7
              Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

              The file you're looking for either never existed or has been deleted.
              It still seems to be an issue with me.

              Hi, I'm anwar.
              I make music, I listen to music, I blog every now and then and sometimes I play games on the internet.
              I've been on this site way too long, but sometimes I can be an ABSOLUTE BOSS.

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              • Ohaider
                FFR Veteran
                • Jun 2012
                • 2893

                #8
                Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

                Originally posted by anwar-inc
                It still seems to be an issue with me.
                arghhh yeah **** tindeck

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                • anwar-inc
                  FFR Player
                  • Jul 2012
                  • 166

                  #9
                  Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

                  It seems to work now.

                  I like this. I don't know if you used a sample for the melodic section, but it seems to work very well and it was a very nice groove you have in there. The drum/percussive section seemed a little weak for me but that's probably because I've been hooked on artists such as Flying Lotus and TOKiMONSTA who in their style tend to use harder drums.

                  Did you use sidechain in your work? I don't know if I can hear it or not. A little bit of a sidechain added would give the tune some more rhythmic value if you're interested in that, though it really isn't needed.

                  Nice work. I enjoyed.

                  A little example of what I listen to and where I'm coming from.

                  Hi, I'm anwar.
                  I make music, I listen to music, I blog every now and then and sometimes I play games on the internet.
                  I've been on this site way too long, but sometimes I can be an ABSOLUTE BOSS.

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                  • Ohaider
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Jun 2012
                    • 2893

                    #10
                    Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

                    Originally posted by anwar-inc
                    A little example of what I listen to and where I'm coming from.
                    Yeah that was unbelievably cool, wasn't going for drums as hard as that though heh just basic commodities

                    And yes i do side chain, not too much though in this song

                    thanks for the feedback and showing me that sick ass song

                    Edit: Oh yeah and the melody at the end wasn't sampled
                    Last edited by Ohaider; 11-27-2012, 07:13 PM.

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                    • Wayward Vagabond
                      Confirmed Heartbreaker
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Jul 2012
                      • 5866

                      #11
                      Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

                      this is so sick ~_~

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                      • Ohaider
                        FFR Veteran
                        • Jun 2012
                        • 2893

                        #12
                        Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh

                        Originally posted by KgZ
                        It's a pretty neat beat, I miss this style of music.

                        Everything sounds pretty mono at the moment. I would definitely try widening your mix a couple of ways. You could add an extra instrument that spreads on both sides left and right on the pan pot. Or you could sample delay your original jazz sample clip so that you create the illusion of stereo imaging.

                        Also, I think the vinyl effect is cool, but I think it's a bit overbearing in the mix as well.

                        Keep it up guy! Love this sound you got going on.
                        Ahhh very useful feedback ty
                        Vinyl effect is pretty loud white noise layered with scratches which explains why it's prolly overbearing, as well as the fact i raised the db a tiny bit above 15 khz hahah, fixed that up though. Thank you!

                        Kept it mono to give the hip hop feel, no vocalists though :[ might see what i can do unless someone wants to rap about downs syndrome or something for the track

                        Glad you enjoyed
                        Last edited by Ohaider; 11-28-2012, 02:43 PM.

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