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  • Choofers
    FFR Player
    FFR Music Producer
    • Dec 2008
    • 6205

    #1

    twodads

    http://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/twodads

    WIP, working title ofc
  • Coolboyrulez0
    VICES
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Aug 2006
    • 10042

    #2
    Re: twodads

    sup wisp
    https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
    https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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    • Ziergdsx18
      ℜ1 ステップチャート 著者
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Nov 2007
      • 2800

      #3
      Re: twodads

      trig(o:


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      • Choofers
        FFR Player
        FFR Music Producer
        • Dec 2008
        • 6205

        #4
        Re: twodads

        some constructive criticism would be gr8, t.hanks in advance

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        • Coolboyrulez0
          VICES
          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Music Producer
          • Aug 2006
          • 10042

          #5
          Re: twodads

          Originally posted by Choofers
          some constructive criticism would be gr8, t.hanks in advance
          chill out, wisp, and finish the track. ty.
          https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
          https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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          • YoshL
            Celestial Harbor
            FFR Simfile Author
            FFR Music Producer
            • Aug 2008
            • 6156

            #6
            Re: twodads

            Tempo. Speeeeedup


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            • hi19hi19
              lol happy
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Oct 2005
              • 12194

              #7
              Re: twodads

              steppablebelebale

              jk its kinda repetitive but honestly sounds really cool so yeah


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              • StoneMcKnuckle
                FFR Player
                • May 2011
                • 790

                #8
                Re: twodads

                1.27 introduces some well-needed variation, but I wasn't really bored until that point either so it's probably timed rather well

                the problem I had was that I liked the stuff after 1.27 worse than the (extremely long) intro. I think it's the arpeggiating synth or whatever it is that's kinda bland. maybe switch up the chord progression a bit or something at that point so you can lay down a coolier melody, or do something different altogether. I'm not sure if it's because it's too similar to the melodies in the intro or not though.

                I think this sounds really cool so far, but I think I imagined it going in a slightly different direction than the one you took. may just be personal pref.

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