Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

Submissions Received: 128
MEGUMEGU (WTP)
Senbonzakura (XC)
Flower of the Sun (Kaneh)
Shiroi Kokoro (Gundam-Dude)
Rock-Mode (Higguy)
Gengaozo (Crazy Star)
Miracle Rush (Kommisar)
blossomdays (Shizuru + ccc901010)
T.O.P (SonicX)
Whimsical, Rock Paper Scissors! (SonicX)
Chase the world (DARK)
SAKURANE (DARK)
Apollon (XxdbxX)
Days of Anger (XxdbxX)
A Whole New World God Only Knows (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
Dead END (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
future gazer (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
Kyoumu Densen (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
way to answer (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
Magical Generation (Zelda-YEH)
Nekuraholic (Zelda-YEH)
Iroha nioedo chirinuru wo (Kaneh)
Hello (MazEi)
The Least 100sec (SonicX)
Funky Sonic World (SonicX)
Borderlands (Bahahowow)
Red Goose (Fly)
An Endless Tewi-ma park (aloola)
Awadaccha Panikuri Vanilla (aloola)
Sky (aloola)
Danzai no Hana ~Guilty Sky~ (Zelda-YEH)
Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (Zelda-YEH)
RPG (Gundam-Dude)
Voice (Niko)
Poseidon (kors k mix) (CHACHA)
The Sampling Paradise (CHACHA)
Super Stream (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
winterv2 (DDRBaller123)
confidence driver (Zelda-YEH)
Flower (SonicX)
Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (SonicX)
Magical (bombastik)
Our Steady Boy (Xanox)
ApolloN (EvilDoRuk)
Break Out Your Stained Brain (aloola)
Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
Vidro Moyou (Higguy)
Nazokake Manmise ~ Uramenyuu (aloola)
Hardcore Machinegun (Blue)
F (Blue)
Paradise Girl Madorin (C1004A)
Grave Consequence (Gundam-Dude)
Towa no Kizuna (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
SHOOT! (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
The Question (DDRTime)
weeeek (SonicX)
Sweet Drops (LongGone)
Neko Miko Reimu B (Kaneh)
Holy Orders (LC)
www . in just night (C1004A)
Party Love ~ Okkiku Naritai ~ (SonicX)
Last fortune (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
A Tiny, Tiny, Clever Commander (Kaneh)
Barran (mi40)
Burion Ruins (mi40)
Pepperi Mountain (mi40)
T-Fanger Battle (mi40)
Toronko Village Spring (mi40)
Intro (mi40)
Escape from the City (C1004A)
Fang of Critias (C1004A)
March for Koala (C1004A)
Harvest Dance (Anaru & hi19hi19)
Battle Won (mi40)
Yellow Line (C1004A)
Kimono Princess (Yume)
Heavenly Moon (Crazy Star)
Beat from Melty Blood (Tweety3187)
SAKURA-KOI-UTA (Tweety3187)
Let's Go! Modulation (aloola)
Flower (SonicX)
perditus†paradisus (XxdbxX)
Shiai Kaishi (Bombastik)
Light In the Air (Tweety3187)
Mars -arrange- (Tweety3187)
Run (Tweety3187)
Shangai Alice of Meiji 17 (Tweety3187)
Shrine of the Wind (Tweety3187)
Solar Sect of Mystic Wisdom ~ Nuclear Fusion (Tweety3187)
Theme of Vega (Tweety3187)
Theme of Zangief (Tweety3187)
Touhou Chireiden Phantasm Medley (Tweety3187)
Velvet Maiden Battle ~ Velvet Battle (Tweety3187)
Asphodelus (Higguy)
Me wo Tojite Gyuttoshiyo (Higguy)
Phantasia Ballad (Gundam-Dude)
Two Faced Lovers (Kaneh)
Melting Time (Kaneh)
Poinsettia (SonicX)
Secret Garden (LC)
Fortissimo -the ultimate crisis- (Kaneh)
Vallista (LongGone)
Acchi de Kocchi de (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
Koyubi no Paradox (AnTiHoLiDaYs)
Bad Apple!! (Erebus_Lux)
Hello (MazEi)
Memoria (Higguy)
Miracle Melody (XanoX)
Neurotoxin (LongGone)
Cadence (Niko)
Sayonara Sekai (aloola)
Short But Seems Long, Time of Our Life (aloola)
My Friend Mudkip (Midigami)
Hatsune Miku - Hatsune Miku no Gekishou (SonicX)
Atama no Taisou (SonicX)
Plastic Mind feat meramipop (Kaneh)
You & Me (aloola)
Koisuru Uchu Sensou!! (Lynn)
Sally (Select)
THE FALLEN (Dark Raven-G)
Haereticus (Dark Raven-G vs. Suzaku-G)
FEARLESS HERO (Lynn)
SquarePanicSerenade (Niko)
Boss Battle 3 (Don)
Old Yuanxian (Kaneh)
Rengetsu Ouka (Gundam-Dude)
Yes! Yuyuyu Yuru Yuri (Niko)
Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End (Gundam-Dude & Niko)
Secret Treasure (Niko)

Black = Not looked at Yet.
Green = Has been accepted to the file queue.
Red = Has been looked at and needs revision.
Orange = Has been looked at but requires file fixes before a decision can be made.
Blue = Has been approved but requires an easier chart.

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

ait gotta get in on this maybe. i'll try to finish a file

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

How many files is (20%)?

Since it's 30-40 files, I'm assuming around 6 max per person?

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

It depends on submission flow, but assuming I get that much yes. Since OD8 had 75 files and 30 were from aloola, that's why I'm restricting this. I just don't want too many files from the same person, I prefer to select the best and have more stepping variety.

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

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yes I'll send plenty of shit later

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

animeweedlord420

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

Flower of the Sun (Kaneh)
Heavy
Yes

Oni
Great file, fun and nice layering. Yes


Gengaozo (Crazy Star)
Heavy
I will consider this your main chart. Song gets repetitive and dumpy. Not a kind of file I was expecting for this pack, it looks like something IcyWorld would accept lol. M50 you could've layered those drums instead of same jump layering. Layering is pretty solid but there's not much more I can say about this. No

Oni
Same as heavy with added difficulty. No


Me wo Tojite Gyuttoshiyo (Higguy)
Standard
Same issues as Oni + Simplify more. No

Heavy
Same issues as Oni + Simplify more. No

Oni
0.439 missed 16th though i can understand why you didn't step it. M3 onwards please decide what your jumps are going to, guitar, bass or drums, they feel randomly placed and don't emphasize any of those, they feel like you just put them there because of it. If they're going to guitar sounds they're inaccurate. 17.500 why you didn't step anything there. 18.000 I don't think there's a need to layer the first two as jumps. 20.000 isn't same sound as above recheck. You used phantom 16ths while you missed a lot of possible 16th sounds during the file. Beat 87 why did you decided to layer all jumps there while you weren't doing that before. Recheck some hands. 116.500 that section breaks the song flow, also the 16ths shouldn't be there. Inconsistent use of jumps during the second part of the song. No


Poseidon (kors k mix) (CHACHA)
Standard
Good as an easy chart. Yes

Heavy
Transition between jumpstream and the next section is iffy. Otherwise good as an easy chart. Yes

Oni
11.250, 19.250, etc 16ths shouldn't be really there, but it's still a passive use there and it isn't a really big deal regarding phantom notes. If you're using 16ths minijacks at the first jumpstream at least layer them to the same sound consistently, they feel randomly placed. I would've liked to see a bit more of hand usage, especially for cymbals since in some parts of the songs you're just not putting them, while you are doing so in some other parts which breaks consistency. Some transitions are iffy but not much of a problem. 218.500 24ths jumpstream seems too much of a difficulty spike for the real difficulty of the file. 226.000 onwards you could've just stopped stepping after the jumpfreeze, there's no really need to layer those 3 last freezes, it makes the ending awkward. Go and fix at least your jacks and i'll consider passing this. Pending


Rock-Mode (Higguy)
Standard
Same as heavy. No

Heavy
Inconsistent jump placing, bad 16th placing. Same issues as your other file. No


(XC) Senbonzakura
Please cut this song for god's sake

Standard
Simplify more. No

Heavy
Please be consistent with your hand chord layering throughout the song. If you're gonna omit some of them do it in the same place. 118 and 134 same sounds, different freeze usage, please be consistent with it. Be consistent with freeze length for same sounds. 387.000 invisible 24ths. 439.000 jack was supposed to be 223 not 233, it's the same sound as the ones before. 449.500 That jumpjack transition was unnecesary. Needs tweaks before I can pass this. No

Oni
I suggest you remove this chart since it makes the song dull and dumpy and there is a huge difficulty gap between the song and transitions, especially the solo part. No


Shiroi Kokoro (Gundam-Dude)
Heavy
Nice 6key conversion. Get your easier chart when you can


The Sampling Paradise (CHACHA)
Please don't mind my suggestions I'm ****ing biased with this song since I would've stepped this soooooooooooo differently. I'll try to go straight to the point.

Standard
Good as an easy chart. Yes

Heavy
Good as an easy chart. Yes

Oni
59.000 those should be 24ths not 32nds. Similar issue to your other file, this one was more hard to notice though, try to use your jacks consistently to same sounds (in jumpstream). 110.250 is 16th space 48th space 16th (measured in 48ths). Again, I would've liked more hand usage in some parts, maybe some mines too. Really fun scoring file. Fix that minor shit and I'll pass it for sure


MEGUMEGU (WTP)
Cut the song, props for making a fully charted long file.

Beginner
Good as an easy chart.

Light
Good as an easy chart.

Standard
Good as an easy chart.

Heavy
Good as an easy chart.

Oni
20.000-21-22 hands don't emphasize much. Hand vocals is gay and doesn't emphasize anything. Putting holds in jumpstream like that you lost the opportunity to use pitch relevancy which the file itself doesn't have much. The chorus could've been a lot more densly layered (with 16ths) since there isn't much going in the song and you're removing the only parts that the song has something decent to step to and you changed it with holds and vocal hands which makes it worse. Also the song it's too long it's boring to play after the 2 min mark. You stepped the guitar solo really plainly and could've been better. I suggest you work on cutting the song, making the file more interesting with 16ths in some parts, not focusing that much on vocals especially and focus on pitch relevancy. No

Edit
LOOOOOOOOOOL mines. No

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

cool i will have something for this

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

achiga-hen giga dibs'd and sent

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

Apollon (XxdbxX)
Oni
Hold abuse, excessive use of long freezes and some short freezes in streams. Unnecessary use of hands in some parts of the song. Dump song, too long, nothing special, phantom 16th streams at some parts of the song. Again not a kind of file i'm expecting for this pack. No

blossomdays (Shizuru+ccc901010)
Heavy
I suggest you to avoid jump patterns during freezes usages and jack usage (112.500). Needs to be more simplified in some parts since it's the only easy chart. No
Oni
M6 i guess you decided to change layering in that section to percussion instead of synths but it's irregular and at the same time that transition is too iffy. If you want to do it start after beat 17.
Hand at 60.500 isn't really necessary
Beat 65 i would personally layer at least a jump in that first step it feels weird.
Not sure what miniholds during the song are going to.
Beat 80 there isn't really a 16th transition there, it's only the background sound. and that hand isn't really necessary
Beat 87 hand isn't necessary either
Beat 93 stream starts there not before.
Beat 96.500 you could've layered that 16th transition for less awkward transition in that section
118.500 there should be a vocal jump placement there.
Beat 57 217 jump transitions shouldn't be really there since you're stepping same sound with different layer but i can pass this if you're doing it for climax theory.
Overall a really good attempt but needs fixes before I can pass this. Maybe

Chase the World (DARK)
Heavy
Worse freeze abuse than Yume's old files lol. Try to limit yourself to layering the most important ones. No
Edit
And this lacks holds lmfao.
Beat 47 section is tecnically innacurate. If you're going to diminish that part making it easier try using half notes.
Try to be more more careful with patterns cause sometimes they end up being only rightish or leftish.
Not much to say about this. Try to mix both charts and add a couple of freezes or use this as your main chart and add an easier one since I cannot accept this as an easier chart compared to your main. Needs to be more simplified. No

Days of Anger (XxdbxX)
Oni
Dump. Too Long. Boring. Not much variation. Not a file for this pack. Sorry. No

Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (SonicX)
Heavy
M6 I consider this borderline dumpy for a file like this.
Some sections of this file are clearly underlayer while others have a very different grade of difficulty. Decide if you're going to make an easy or a hard file.
Some 8ths are innacurate stepped to nothing
To be short file doesn't flow with the song and it's one of the most important things. No

Me wo Tojite Gyuttoshiyo (Higguy)
Standard
Good as an easy chart. Yes
Heavy
Good as an easy chart. Yes
Oni
To be honest I think you're just rushing to get a file in and resending things fast or maybe you want my advice, but sometimes it's better to discover some things on your own (looking at other files, experimenting yourself, listening closely to the song).
If you want comments well yeah I see a lot of improvements, though I feel file is very generic and underlayered at some points: for example you could've layered beat 61 16th transition (and a lot more in the file are like this)
Jump and hand placement are a lot more solid than last time, there are some mistakes but no big deal. (try figuring out yourself if you can, it serves as good practice)
Honestly I was going to pass this but since the mix just started you've got time. Take your time finish your file don't rush and come back at me later. Pending

Miracle Rush (Kommisar)
NOTE TO MYSELF: Get a better audio file.

Oni
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Achiga-Hen. Fun MA file. Beat 83 and 84 shouldn't be double freezes? (the 8th and the 16th one). Honestly I just happened to find that out by playing. Maybe you have a reason for not layering it there. Yes and get your easy chart when you can.

Party Love ~ Okkiku Naritai ~ (SonicX)
Same issues as your other file. No

Sakurane (DARK)
Edit
Good as an easy chart. Yes
Heavy
Worse freeze abuse than Yume's old files lol. Try to limit yourself to layering the most important ones. File without holds could've be more heavy layered, since edit is the same without holds so it feels kinda plain. No


T.O.P (SonicX)
Inconsistent and innacurate tap vocal layering.
Sometimes doesn't flow well
Offset is a bit late . No

Whimsical, Rock Paper Scissors! (SonicX)
Same issues as your other files. No

Just in case I'm not against hard files or borderline dumps like kore ga umi e no ai janai ka from OD8 but keep the file somewhere between dumpy and not dumpy.

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

is xxdbxx really the xxdbxx from DJ MAX or is it just some guy with the name lol

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

Would probably submit something...but first time to get started on another Arc Rise song and see if I can motivate myself to fix up Kazoku Totalis and make another chart for that...

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

do you guys accept OST of anime-related movies?

ex) OST of REDLINE

Re: Otaku's Dream 2nd Keyboard Mix (Submissions Open)

As long as it's Japan/Korea related, so yes.