ODIPack3 submissions (Release when graphics are done)

measure 2-10 i would the 32nd patterns more randomly varied since they are repeating for quite a while. but this is not important, do as you like
measure 11-12 this is not correctly done to the guitar. you should really use a bunch of cool freezes to the guitar here since it's a bunch of open strings note like that while having played palm-muted notes for basically the entire riff.
measure 17, here you have a 32nd jumptrill, you have this is many parts of the file. the only instrument that actually plays the 32nd is of course only the drums, therefore it will be much better to keep the 32nd a single note and not a jump, and have the 16th and 4th still as jumps (since they also have the piano obviously). when you do it like that instead you have a much bigger freedom with patterns that will flow just as well as just a trill, this way you can make the 32nds look different every time and get much greater variation instead of it being the same jumptrill like this every time.
measure 22-25 this is not at all accurate. for sure not from measure 24 at least. listen to it much slowed down, it's not hard to make out how it should be from measure 24-25. measure 22-23 is tougher and could be left the way it is.
measure 26-33 in this entire section i would for sure add the piano. it's supercool. i would drop the drums and add the piano then layer the vocalhits as jumps since the vocals are really cool too. if you want it hard you could perhaps even add the drums as well, or instead make it hands when the vocals are doubled (they are in measure 27, 29, 31, 32.5 & 33)
measure 26 the 16th to the vocals should be a minijack here too
measure 28 the second last minijack might actually not be a minijack but its fine
measure 32 the second minijack shouldn't be a minijack, the two vocalhits are different notes
measure 34 sounds like one 16th in the middle shouldn't be there
measure 35&37 the 32nds here are fine because you have dropped the guitar at the beginning of the measure
measure 38 here i think the 32nd should be a single
measure 40 the last 8th jump should be a single as it's not a snare drum hit
measure 42 missing piano note after the last minijack (lower than the minijack)
measure 43 these minijacks also has low notes after them, it's constant 16ths.
meausre 44&45 this is not accurate, you must slow it down and use color notes. this can become really cool
measure 46 missing piano notes in the beginning of the measure since you're stepping the piano later on. i think you probably shouldn't have the piano at all here and just have the guitar and some percussion, what percussion to have depends on the previous part that i think needs be remade, i think you could have guitar+percussion in that part too.

ok this file is 200 measures long lol. if i would keep going with this it'd take me hours, it's unfortunate that you didn't submit this much earlier in the pack when i would've had time to help you with everything. please look over the rest of yourself and perhaps you can figure out how to change many things by looking at my notes for these previous parts, as the file had many similar parts. good luck with this hope you have time to work a lot on it.